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3in1 Triptych Kerkstraat in Haarlem


3in1 Triptych Kerkstraat in Haarlem
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Copyright: Hans Spruijt (GreenBaron) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3075 W: 778 N: 9403] (37603)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-29
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Experimental
Camera: Nikon D70s, SIGMA 28-70mm F2.8-4, Hitachi4GBMicrodrive
Exposure: f/8, 1/180 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday Theme 2008/07/04 "3in1" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-07-03 5:29
Viewed: 351
Points: 66
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
3in1 Triptych Kerkstraat in Haarlem

Well a triptych from Haarlem for Smurfie's Friday theme "3in1". It's the Kerkstraat (=Church street) in Haarlem which I posted before, but in a different season, you can find that image here.

Took three shots from the same POV with with different angles. And indeed it was quite windy that day, look at the position of the little cloud :-)

Not much PP work, only minor saturation, contrast and brightness adjustments. Copy/paste three images on one background and resized, sharpened and framed.
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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3298 W: 265 N: 6190] (23052)
  • [2008-07-03 5:32]

The three different PoVs are very nicely assembled for a superb finish
Great composition, colours and details throughout
TFs
silke

Bom dia Hans

great conception 3 in 1 and execution. Very good taste and genious.

my regards

teresat

Love how you did this one Hans! Three view, from up and down! Really nice work keeping the sky from being too bright, also, I get to see the movement of the cloud! Excellent posting!
B-)
Linda

  • Great 
  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 780 W: 0 N: 1191] (4966)
  • [2008-07-03 6:10]

Hi Hans
Great idea to make it look like a triptick.
All 3 scenes well taken and you do have mouvement with the little cloud.
Nice work
Dot

  • Great 
  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2096 W: 379 N: 2059] (22066)
  • [2008-07-03 7:46]

Merhaba Myfriend dear Hans...
Excellent job with beautiful photo, wonderful colors and a very beautiful shot....
Selamlar...
Milas...

  • Great 
  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1445 W: 75 N: 810] (7204)
  • [2008-07-03 8:22]

Interesting composition, colors & details. Well done.
Mitra

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2491 W: 51 N: 2923] (13820)
  • [2008-07-03 9:17]

Wonderful composition and montage 3 picture Hans,clas colpurs and wonderful presentation of the perspective.Excellent shadows and light.
Best wishes.
Janusz

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2982 W: 553 N: 3288] (14592)
  • [2008-07-03 9:21]

Hi Hans,
Excellent entry for the theme! I like your choice of images with the nice progression from the street towards the sky. Beautiful perspective. Bravo! Annie

Hi Hans,
Nice presentation for the theme with good colours, I think the shadows could do with a little lift but other than that it's good.
Well done
Regards Andy

Hi hans,

I really like your presentation, very different and interesting!
nice pictures too.

LuDivine

  • Great 
  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1084 W: 120 N: 1840] (9174)
  • [2008-07-03 13:11]

Leuk effect geeft dit wel ja.. ;-)
Het geheel geeft een mooi overzicht van het straatje... wel jammer, dat er zoveel schaduw is aan de linkerkant..... maar je kan niet alles hebben.. toch?

Gr.,
Anneke

hi hans, neat split shot, this looks like a picture perfect little road, very intersting post to look at,
tfs,
scott

Three good shots in one very fine
presentation which fit perfect to the theme. Good exposure for each one with nice colors.
Mario

  • Great 
  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1564 W: 118 N: 3542] (14179)
  • [2008-07-03 16:40]

Hello Hans
really a cool way to process your Friday Shot :)
Very interesting notes... I love the details and light on the path way


Tricia

  • Great 
  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2046 W: 135 N: 3062] (16543)
  • [2008-07-03 19:55]

Hi Hans,

Very creative and clever idea, excellent pov and composition too, especially the road/path is leading my eyes toward the top of the building, well captured and framing, :D


Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

  • Great 
  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3158 W: 213 N: 6658] (26310)
  • [2008-07-03 19:56]

Reaching for the sky.
This is a different way to show us the scene Hans. Nicely framed too.
TFS
Janice

  • Great 
  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1016 W: 17 N: 1156] (6444)
  • [2008-07-03 22:29]

Interesting picture(s) good povs You have some nice povs and it weirdly works. TFS
Christan

  • Great 
  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 574 W: 43 N: 641] (4004)
  • [2008-07-04 0:58]

Hi HAns
A very creative look at a vertical panorama! A great tought indeed that combined creates a beautiful and interestic optical effect.
My compliments, indeed
Argiris

Hi Hans,
A really nice idea presenting your triptych in the vertical format. It is interesting to see the movement between each image. A good one for the theme, well seen.
Pete.

  • Great 
  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1658 W: 0 N: 1] (10653)
  • [2008-07-04 3:11]

Hallo Hans
Mooie montage van 3 mooie foto's
Gr Jos
P**

Hello Hans,

Although not really happening, the series seems to take us deeper into the street and then elevate!
A very well composed series with good details and colours.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Bonjour Hans,
Joli montage en trois dimension de cette ruelle!
Amicalement Odile:)

Hello
Very pretty picture. Beautiful colours and sharpness. Splendid workshop. Interesting description . I greet Mark

  • Great 
  • Cyn Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 49 W: 0 N: 15] (310)
  • [2008-07-04 14:23]

Hey Hans,mooi pp werkje, goed gedaan ! Heel interessant! gr Marleen

Hello Hansie

3 really excellent captures here, nice POVs and good sharp detail with lovely colour saturation. Nicely positioned in the frame too.

TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen

  • Great 
  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4087 W: 209 N: 3555] (26949)
  • [2008-07-05 4:09]

Hi Hans

A superb vertical triptych, with good color & sharpness. Nice entry in the theme. Tfs!

Hello Hans,
3 step of shots in different angle and POV..
Top,middle and bottom..all gives an excellent results..the contrasting of light and shadow also works fine here..Good capture and this is really nice for the theme..Well done my friend.

CM

tomorrow :)
Thanks for the wonderful critique on "F/T 3 in 1".

Cleverly executed Hans, good colour in each image and the detail remained with the shrinking.
David

  • Great 
  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5072 W: 178 N: 5948] (31677)
  • [2008-07-06 9:49]

Hello Hans

Beautiful visual!
I like your picture done in 3 parts
3 great close of each part of this scene!
A beautiful and wonderful shot!
Great composition Hans!
Congratulations .

Sérgio

Kijk, DAT is nou origineel. Iedereen maakt een panorama in de breedte, en jij weet het in de hoogte te doen. Leuk hoor.
Uiteraard ken ik deze plek. Goed geschoten.
groeten,
Joop!

  • Great 
  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3216 W: 368 N: 2667] (11482)
  • [2008-07-07 14:10]

Due to the angles in each shot we get the impression you used a fish-eye lens, Hans, and I like that effect. At first I didn't understood what you tried to do here, but looking at the shot a couple of times I admit it works better and better.
One nit-pick; I'd have cropped above the rooftops in the top shot, only 1 mm would make a difference I guess.
Apart from that, I like the way you present this one vertically which is quite uncommon in triptychs.
Nice one. TFS

Hello Hans

'n Pragtige keuse vir hierdie drie-in-een komposisie. Helder en duidelik en ek hou van hoe jy iets uit elke foto in die volgende herhaal

Wel gedaan

Groete

Wia

An interesting interpretation of theme's title.

Good PP work.
very creative :)
Tom
:)

Hans, ik neem alvast één uit de verzameling die opvalt ...
( want ik sta " achter " :-) )

Originele voorstelling door een eigen invulling van
de " filmstrip ".
De compositie van elk voor het " verhaaltje " ( hihi )
is ok, maar ... zou toch de linker huizenrij iets
lichter gemaakt hebben.

Die wolk ... ach die maakt het spel " dynamisch " ;-)

Groetjes
Jan

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