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Naaldwijk in Holland


Naaldwijk in Holland
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Copyright: Josine Kouwenberghe (Josine) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 922 W: 21 N: 652] (4069)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-13
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/7.6, 1/215 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-04-26 0:27
Viewed: 521
Points: 50
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Naaldwijk(again) Saturday August 13,
here same location as previous photo.

A snapshot of two Ladies resting, in the way older inhabitants must have done so for hundreds of years.

Bye bye :-)

Josine

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Hi Josine!

A very nice daily life shot of the ladies 'in waiting'? (LOL)...I can not tell what the lady on the left is holding, but overall a fine capture!!

GT

not a bad shot josine, however i think a closer shot of these two ladies, from the same pov would have been even more powerful!

i love these old buildings, great architecture, but I think the main focus you should place here is on the people over the buildings!

none the less, keep up the good work
-Bartek

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1522 W: 1 N: 143] (12326)
  • [2006-04-26 3:22]

Daar is nog juist een bankje te kort.
Een mooie ouderwetse vloer.
.

interesting photo Josine, just take care with the leaning building, you can easily fix your horizon in photoshop

jaco

Lovely continuation of your serie, nice DOF and great colors.
Bravo!
Vassilis

Hi Josine,

Lovely, rich colours and lighting! I like the daily and the decisive feeling you've captured here!
Well done!

Constantinos

Hi Josine,
Again you captured very well the atmosphere of Holland I remember from my visits there. Those towns are so picturesque and lovely. However, I would change here those tilting walls because for me they distract the viewer from these two nice ladies. I made a ws, hope you like it.

rgds
Dagmara

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3713 W: 216 N: 3721] (28231)
  • [2006-04-26 22:07]

Hi Josine

Good color, sharpness, & lighting. Perhaps a slight cw rotation? I like the diagonal axis, which adds dynamism. Well done!

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  • NINIX Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 318 W: 151 N: 581] (6293)
  • [2006-04-27 4:42]

Ho Joos,

Prachtig sfeerprentje! Alles is oud op de foto behalve de radio. Mooie geveltjes.
Maar uh alles staat wel een beetje scheef.

Leuke steentjes ook, volgende keer "Josine street art"?

Hendrik

Hi Josine,
I like this picture and find it interesting for a number of reasons.The Ladies, the old houses and your composition. The POV is good as is the colour and exposure.
Best wishes
Bill

Hallo Josine
Nou jij weet ook niet van ophouden he? Naaldwijk wordt door jou goed op de kaart gezet :-) Lekkere shot Joos
Groetjes
Rob

Hallo Joos
Leuke shot! De huizen leunen iets voorover en Birchee deed een aardige workshop. Vaak zijn deze oude huizen echt uit het lood en daar doe je als fotogra'veuse' niet veel aan. Mooi!
Groetjes
John

Hi Josine, another good shot in your series. Lovely colours, good POV. The workshop Dagmara did definitely adds another view. TFS,
David
PS Many thanks for your comment on Princes Square III

Nice decisive capture Josine. I think that one of the older ladies has spotted you, watch out she points a crooked finger at you.

Well done
TFS
Marie-Lise

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  • sleger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 564 W: 57 N: 181] (3549)
  • [2006-05-02 18:06]

Hello Josine.

This seems a very nice place to live. Thats the impression we get from the picture.

Sylvain

Hi Josine,
Great architectural shot with 2 Old Ladies:)
I like your pov,colors,sharpness,focus,buildings details,dof and framing.Well Done.TFS
Happy Mother's Day,
Chris

nice colors and details here Josine
well composed

Hi Josine, it's nice to see the 2 ladies together, one is showing something to the other one but she seems to be more interested in her black thing she has in her hands.

Lovely back alley, nice colours. Well taken. And the ws has taken care of the lens distortion.

Tfs and have a great day! Yan :)

Another nice shot.
I like your series on buildings.
Well done.
Best wishes,
Ben

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  • izler Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 536 W: 83 N: 343] (4059)
  • [2006-08-04 14:57]

hi Josine
i like your photo that is include beautiful Netherlands houses and sitting pretty people. nice composition. colours, pov, contrast, frame and note are great.
tfs
regards
izler

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  • orkhan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 836 W: 167 N: 372] (3526)
  • [2006-08-22 11:42]

Tenderness daily life picture, with lovely colors and light.
TFS

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2006-09-25 9:25]

A beautiful moment has been captured in an exciting compostion. Great perspective and details.

Thanks for sharing a relaxing shot.

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  • HaBeMa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 684 W: 142 N: 632] (3062)
  • [2006-10-10 13:53]

Hi dear Josine;Nice smart Ladies,behind house have very nice colors,thanks...
Habema.
:-]

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1701 W: 0 N: 1] (11486)
  • [2006-12-25 4:34]

Hallo Josine

Mooi hollands plaatje in mooie kleuren en goed van opbouw.
Gr Jos

Hallo Josine.
Prachtige opname uit een van de hofjes in Naaldwijk. Ik ben er eens geweest daar waar een kerkje stond.
je hebt er een schiterende compositie van gemaakt.
Groet Frans

Nice shot capturing the romantic street - the lady is just noticing you taking a picture and telling her friend....
Maybe a little rotation to the right....
Cheers
Otto

hello Josine,

love this old building houses.. you have such a beautiful architecture there.. simply lovely to see something like this.

nice finding.. lovely composition and detail.

well done. tfs..

regards, terry

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