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missing one?


missing one?
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Copyright: mathias abdelmalik (tias) (38)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-09-23
Categories: Food
Exposure: f/4, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-09-30 13:47
Viewed: 499
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Do you miss anything in this picture?
A very cheap tray of apples which creates a fantastic coloureffect!
any ideas about improving this picture???
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  • Mite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 113 W: 0 N: 61] (514)
  • [2006-09-30 14:13]

Exposure is perfect (to my taste) and the colors are well balanced, looks very natural (and edible, hence the missing one!)Sharpness could be improved a bit, maybe using manual focus or stopping down to 5.6 or even 8.0 but then you'd probably need a tripod or flash.
Good comp. TFS
Michel

Hello Mathias,

The composition is good, a bit of sharpness will make this perfect.I've done a workshop on this, hope you like it..

Cheers,
Roy

Hello,

Nice color and interesting material!
I did a workshop to draw the image out a bit.
I don't know whether you like it or not.

Regards,
mikio

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