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A Fly..


A Fly..
Photo Information
Copyright: Vivianne de With (Vivianne) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 6 N: 21] (198)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-10-23 4:34
Viewed: 749
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Inspired by my family members, I took my mothers camera and went on a walk in our garden. I like this flower and so does the fly...
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To NL14078: Thanks!n-ick 1 11-01 11:13
To ruudblok: Bedankt!Vivianne 3 10-25 07:27
To glint: Thanks!Vivianne 1 10-24 06:58
To albyro: Thanks!Vivianne 1 10-23 13:57
To mobiaga: Thank you!Vivianne 1 10-23 07:24
To A-lex: Dank je!Vivianne 1 10-23 07:18
To GreenBaron: Thank you!Vivianne 1 10-23 07:14
To Jan: Thanks!Vivianne 1 10-23 07:10
To Kalesin: Thank you!Vivianne 1 10-23 07:05
To Janice: Thanks!Vivianne 1 10-23 06:52
To drackness: Thanks!Vivianne 1 10-23 06:42
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Critiques [Translate]

Hi Vivianne... first welcome to TL, second this is a great shot i like it so much, nice sharpness... nice crop and excellent macro, keep it... Thanks For Sharing (TFS)

Hello Vivianne - welcome to TLens. You show us quite a beauty here. The flower is nice and clear to see, and the insect is too. Pretty colours, well done,
Janice

Hello Vivianne,
Wellcome to TL. This is very clear and beeautiful macro, nicely cropped and framed.Good work.
Cheers,
Jelena

Hi Viviane!Nice compo and colours, Exellent macro!Good luck!
Regards, Aga

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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 119 N: 606] (3981)
  • [2006-10-23 6:31]
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Hai Vivianne, I really like your photo! Your frame is perfect!! You've used the right colours!!
Please, make more pictures!

Hi Vivianne,
Welcome on TL and have fun! You even can improve your English language when reading and writing comments. Very nice first picture great sharpnes and nice lighting! An excellent photo for TL. Very well done and TFS!
Hans

Nice picture from you your mother posted to TL! Or is it your sister.

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 117 W: 52 N: 244] (2000)
  • [2006-10-23 6:58]
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He Viv,

Nou ook mijn complimenten! Hele gave foto!Vooral met dat vliegbeestje!
Ook het frame is mooi... gave kleuren!! Tot snel
Alex

Hi Vivianne, Welcome on TL. A beautiful macro shot. I waited for to you with other shot...

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 575 W: 2 N: 384] (2573)
  • [2006-10-23 16:14]
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hello Vivienne,
excellent macro, beautifully composed and framed.I like the light greens and yellow.
well done, keep posting
Bev

Wekom bij TL Vivianne,
Ik hoop dat je er even veel plezier aan beleeft als ik
Goede compositie in deze macro
de foto kan iets meer contrast aan
Maar dat is later zorg
Mooi gedaan
RuudBlok

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  • Mas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 59 W: 62 N: 250] (2555)
  • [2006-10-30 8:28]
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Hoi Vivianne,

Welcome to TrekLens !
I see you're also infected by the TL virus. Good thing !
Your first photo is awesome ! I like the composition and the depth in the photo. The colors are beautiful. I'm looking forward to your next contribution.
Thanks for sharing
Marcel

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1691 W: 0 N: 1] (11039)
  • [2006-12-06 5:59]

Hallo Vivianne

Welkom bij TL
Deze bloem met vlieg is meteen een gode binnenkomer. Kijk wel uit met kadertjes en titels deze trekken de aandacht af van het onderwerp.Maar dat is mijn mening.
Gr Jos

HELLO!VIVIANNE
THIS WORK IS BEAUTIFUL IS A HARD CAPTURE, BUT YOU DID IT
CHEERS
YOUR FRIEND
MARY

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1462 W: 126 N: 2045] (17677)
  • [2008-03-19 12:32]

Hello Vivianne, very graceful composition, beautiful colors and great exposure, well done, thanks!

Mario

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1838 W: 69 N: 0] (17532)
  • [2008-03-29 1:44]

Hi Viviane ;)))
Amazing macro shot...beautiful details, Compliments,
Have a nice WE,
J ;)

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