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Just an old window


Just an old window
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Copyright: Josine Kouwenberghe (Josine) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 922 W: 21 N: 652] (4069)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-08-06
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 4300
Exposure: f/2.8
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-10-29 2:07
Viewed: 761
Points: 70
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Last year on a walk in the center of my town Breda
I noticed this old window and wanted it to show in here in old black and white glamour.

Bye bye
Josine
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  • Great 
  • BenF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 376 W: 0 N: 351] (2991)
  • [2006-10-29 2:16]

Good pattern shot.
Looks good in B&W
Try to adjust the contrast
a little. Just my opinion.
Well done,
BEN

Hai Josine,
Een mooie foto van vergane glorie,Het lijkt op een gevangenis raam met dat hekwerk aan de binnenkant.
Gr, Jacqueline

great patterns and very good pov Josine.
TFS
Regards
Chris

Hi Josine, nice old window with the metal mesh inside.

Nice line made by the panes and the bricks.

Well seen, Yan :)

ps: thx so much for your visit in "My Mother's Favourite Trees".

  • Great 
  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3368 W: 87 N: 2746] (18125)
  • [2006-10-29 5:34]

Howdo Josine.
t zou eigenlijk zonder de reflections moeten.
Wel goed gezien.
Doei.
Jan

I think more place, more wall on the right side and the bottom would be perfect

  • Great 
  • star Gold Star Critiquer [C: 99 W: 0 N: 57] (452)
  • [2006-10-29 7:26]

Hi Josine,
Very nice compo.here.I think you've done the best in choosing to make this in B/W.
Well done.
TFS

Hallo Josine.
Erg mooi gedaan, vooral dat het niet in het midden zit geeft iets speciaals.
door de lichte inkijk ben je toch nieuwsgierig wat er binnen is.
Heelmooi.
Groet Frans

I like windows. They each have their own story. I'm always wondering what is happening inside. The B&W adds some drama to it.

  • Great 
  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5248 W: 181 N: 6230] (32872)
  • [2006-10-29 8:52]

Jello Josine,

Beautiful look of this window, taste of the details inside of her, Beautiful visual in b/w.
Very good taste and use of him.
Congratulations

Sérgio

Nice BW shot. Love the pattern in the window.
TFS.
Pierre

Hallo Joos
Tja..scherp .. apart en een stukje historie.... Een zw/wit wel.. blijf onderzoeken ^_^ Groetjes
John

Well seen and captured, great choice of B&W. The pattern is lovely and the exposure very good.
Well done!
Vassilis

Hi Josine,

Great B&W photo!!! Excellent details and contrast! Nice lighting and POV!

Well done
Constantinos

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2438 W: 92 N: 2012] (10484)
  • [2006-10-30 6:46]

Hi Jisine,
This is a nice view of this window with great details and texture. I'm not sure with the choice of cropping on the bottom right I find that the window is missing some space, but this is my feeling. The rest is excellent with a nice choice of B&W with a lot of contrast. TFS
Luc

  • Great 
  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3371 W: 284 N: 6444] (23940)
  • [2006-10-31 6:08]

Superb colours and textures in the B&W capture. I love the off-centre composition. TFS
Silke
(back tomorrow with :))

Hello Josine,

A nice study this, good choice of B&W. Nice to see you posting!
Best wishes
Bill

  • Great 
  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2512 W: 48 N: 2993] (14124)
  • [2006-10-31 11:01]

Beautiful visual photo,I like the windows shot.Excellent details and very good captured. Congratulations.
janusz

Hoi Joos
Aan de zwart wit zie ik, mooie strakke en wat ouderwets aandonde foto Joos. Leuk genomen een beetje a-symetrisch. Fijne dag en groet
Rob

Nice old window! I really like the BW conversion! B-)
Linda

  • Great 
  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2006-11-04 7:55]

Hello Josine,
very nice B/W, with great textures and excellent details. Very well done.
Sky

Hi Josine...well presented in BW and an interesting window. The lack of room doesn't bother me at all but the tilt does, it would have looked so much better if the window was straighter, TFS,
David
Many thanks for your comment on
Tasmanian Tulips- For Yan

nice B&W shot. TFS

Very moody photo, almost expect to see someone behind the window crying..interesting shot with the different geometric lines..nicely done. TFS
Donna :o)

  • Great 
  • berek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 729 W: 61 N: 32] (207)
  • [2006-11-14 2:54]

Hi Josine,
lovely cute window. well framed my friend. take care. have a nice day.
Burak
my overall evaluation -> ***

  • Great 
  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1525 W: 7 N: 1610] (8932)
  • [2006-11-14 18:11]

Gread B&W windows Josine,i like the old windows,this is wonderful composed work.
Congratulations.
Eva

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4194 W: 222 N: 3837] (28105)
  • [2006-11-14 22:31]

Hi Josine

I like the tonal range, lighting, texture & tonal range. Good sharpness & pov, with excellent framing of the window. Tfs!

  • Great 
  • izler Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 537 W: 83 N: 343] (4049)
  • [2006-12-11 17:40]

hello Josine
here is impressive "window in window style" working. i like your perspective and choice of B&W in your photo. composition, details and framing are great
TFS
regards
izler

  • Great 
  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1694 W: 0 N: 1] (11067)
  • [2006-12-20 6:34]

Hallo Josine

Juist door zijn soberheid is hij mooi.
Gr Jos

  • Great 
  • HaBeMa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 687 W: 142 N: 633] (3062)
  • [2007-02-28 16:20]

Hi Josine;good black/white work,good sharp....
Habema.
:-]

Interesting joice to put the window off-center. I used to belong to a co-op art gallery many years ago, called 'Off-Center-Center'. The name made a statement, and I belive your shot does to!
Cheers
Otto
:) later

  • Great 
  • sleger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 564 W: 57 N: 181] (3549)
  • [2007-03-14 21:22]

Hello Josine

It was a good idea to present this old window in black & white. It makes us travel back in time.
TFS

Cheers, Sylvain

Saludos Josine

de antaño la ventana que la hace linda un gran trabajo de edicion

Nat

De vertrouwde josinestijl heel eenvoudig en toch knap werkje

vele groetjes van Ed&Lin :-)

Hello Josine,
I like the framing and hint of mystery inside!
Greetings,
Pablo -

  • Great 
  • salmi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 850 W: 5 N: 430] (4732)
  • [2007-11-20 5:37]

Hej Joos,
Interesting picture, I love the old windows and this one is great, the B/W idea is good. Thanks my friend!
Mihaela

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