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Florentina
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Copyright: Peter Riemslag Baas (riems) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 115 W: 14 N: 45] (1677)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-13
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D2X, Nikkor AF 85f/1.4D
Exposure: f/11, 1/250 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Beauty, kobieta ze snu #4 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-03-14 13:12
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Favorites: 5 [view]
Points: 58
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  • BenF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 299 W: 0 N: 341] (3049)
  • [2007-03-14 13:25]
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Hi Peter,
Very nice portrait, lovely skin tones, perfect exposure,
and beautiful model.
Well done,
BEn

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  • twin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 423 W: 126 N: 200] (7348)
  • [2007-03-14 13:45]
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perfect...
love it..
congratulations Peter...

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  • talikf (517)
  • [2007-03-14 13:52]
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Wow, very nice, I love the detail in her eyes

What a pretty face!! :)
Perfect lightings!!
What kind of light sources have you used, Peter??
I think you could emphasize more of her beauty with using a tighter composition. Cropping from the hair on the sides could make here eyes more striking!! I did a WS for you what I mean! :) Hope you like it!
cheers
ToM

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  • Asim Silver Star Critiquer [C: 27 W: 3 N: 4] (338)
  • [2007-03-14 14:36]
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Hi Peter.
Very good light and beautiful face. TFS.

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1312 W: 47 N: 2914] (16758)
  • [2007-03-14 14:37]
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Beautiful concept for portrait - like cover page, congratulations - Tomek

Beautiful mode. The look in her eyes cuts right through you. Light, focus and colour balance are all spot on.
I tried a slightly softer look in a WS. Hope you don't mind.
Andrei

Tjonge! Weer erg mooi! Geweldig hoe je gegrepen wordt door de blik in de ogen!
TFS,
Willienda

eneh; ben erg jaloers op je H3D 31mp.... :-)

This is a beautiful portrait Peter.
Great lighting, skin tones and detail.
Congratulations.
Regards Mark

Placing this shot in my Beauty theme. :)

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  • Maite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 3 N: 205] (1317)
  • [2007-03-14 14:51]
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Hello Peter
An excellent portrait with perfect quality.
A real beauty.
Congratulations!
Maite

Jeetje Peter,

Stuur haar eens langs. Eens kijken of ze ook zo kijkt in MIJN camera. :-)
'kHeb eigenlijk niks toe te voegen aan wat mijn voorgangers al zeiden. 't Is gewoon érg goed!
Groet,
Joop

Hi Peter
I'd be interested to know what PP work you did on this. Some gaussian blur, diffuse glow ...?
Excellent crop and lighting and compliments to your model.
Rew

I like the full frontal pose. The lighting is great, and the skin tones perfect. Good sharpness on the eyes. What kind of lighting did you use.

Excellent Peter. An attarctive model, good eye contact and lovely skin tones. Very good PP work to deliver this final result. TFS,
David

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1303 W: 96 N: 1022] (8472)
  • [2007-03-14 16:44]

Hi Peter. Congratulations on this fine portrait. Your note says it all. Well presented and a lovely lady. Murray.

Deze is ook heel mooi
Zoue alleen de ogen nog wat bijwerken
de softbox zit er te veel in
Ruud

Hoi Peter,
Excellent portrait, razor sharp nice lighting and perfect skin tones. My compiments Peter!
Hans

Hi Peter,
A beautifully captured portrait of an obviously attractive lady. Fantastic lighting creating the lovely skin tones. Well done. Cheers, Todd

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1407 W: 275 N: 1946] (11992)
  • [2007-03-14 18:43]
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Hi Peter.
Fantastic ... what I can say more ... she is beautiful.
Congratulations.
Janek J-23

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  • Konie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 348 W: 29 N: 298] (3006)
  • [2007-03-14 20:53]
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Wow, what a beauty well captured. Everything here is perfect. TFS.

Konie

Hi Peter
deze is echt perfect
haar ogen.. wow en zo scherp
super mooi portret
tfs
M.

Good work
tfs
v.

hi peter,
tight cropping, sharpness, exposure and warm colors... wonderful, wonderful... really, wonderful. tfs!
jeff

Beautiful portrait - superb detail and catchlights in the eyes and great skin tones. Nothing more to add than "bravo!"
Thanks for sharing
Mark

Hi Peter,
Very nice portrait...
Beautiful model...
Congratulations!
Thanks,

What a superb capture. Perfect in every sense of word. That expression is a winner. Good light control and superb clarity. Perfect skin tone. You did very well here. Congrats.

What a beauty! Nicely lit and processed too. Well done.

Saludos Peter

un hermoso e interesante rostro digna hasta de dibujar al oleo te felicito


Nat

Excellent portrait, excellent sharpness and details, excellent model

Excellent !

Hi Peter,
Lovely expression in this gorgeous woman !
Excellent focus and quality. I like the soft tones and how you framed the picture.
Best Regards
Aires

Very nice portrait perfect for the highkey !
Look at The WS ;o)

Thanks
MM

Beautiful portrait. Lovely details and the light is perfect.

Eda

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