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Upstairs downstairs


Upstairs downstairs
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Copyright: Josine Kouwenberghe (Josine) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 922 W: 21 N: 652] (4069)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-25
Categories: Transportation, Architecture
Exposure: f/8, 1/20 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): 90-99 points [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-04-29 19:40
Viewed: 851
Points: 96
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Upstairs downstairs

Hello all, another photo of the shopping mall in Breda
some 5-6 weeks ago, having coffee with JohnTulip and his wife Yolanda in our shopping center *de Barones*
(yes the Mother of GreenBaron) :-)
John lend me his camera (CAnon 30 D) a little hour, to do a shoot-out.
(The CF card is mine :-)) I liked the camera enormous, but will buy in a few the Canon 400d, smaller

Bye bye
Josine

Refugee, Hormon_Manyer, Pops71, riverfriends, Photograph2u, Xalkida, vsinopoulos, JohnTulip, Viking, evanrizo, vandana2923, Helkoryo, inaam, sleger, Jacqueline, HaBeMa, cleocat, Silke, Beger, chrisJ, thiv56 has marked this note useful
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hello
good POV & framing showing us a nice symetry, good colours, well seen
regards
jo

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  • kbeall Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 577 W: 112 N: 901] (3542)
  • [2007-04-29 23:12]

Hello Josine,
I like the symmetry here as well as the warm tones and the curves vs. lines.
All the best,
Karen

Mooie kleur zetting Joos. Heel apart genomen. Ik dacht even toen ik je het zag nemen ..poe poe.. moilijk situatie-tje maar het is ok!
Groet
John

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3342 W: 85 N: 2704] (17892)
  • [2007-04-30 5:14]

Hoi Josine.
Prachtig plaatje heb je met die canon geschoten. De 400 is ook een zeer goede canon.
Fijne koninginen dag. Keep it 'sober'.
Jan

Hi Josine,

A great photo!! I like the perspective here and the warm lighting!

Very well done and TFS
Constantinos

Hello Josine,
Superb POV. I like the symetry and the warm colors. The delicate framing is a very good choice. Well done. Congratulations
Greetings
Pierre

Hi Josine:
I dont know what John wrote in a strange languge:)
Outstanding details all the way through...
I like the cemetrical view on this with the tonal rages that are here.
Excellent work.
David
9I did take your advice on roses:)

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  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1092 W: 119 N: 1914] (9484)
  • [2007-04-30 10:27]

Hi Josine,
Pics with as much symmetry as you show here, are quite difficult to get right... but... you did it!

A great example Josine! great.

Cheers,
Anneke

Hoi Joos,
Heerlijke plaat, geweldig perspectief. Toch fijn te weten dat er een Mall in Breda, is vernoemd naar mijn moeder :)
Hans

:) Later....

Hi Josine, this image has the wow factor!
I love the comp on the stairs, the grain the colours. Very well done!

Take care, Yan :)

Hello Josine,
Pleasant symmetry!
Well done on exposure, where you make well use of present light...
Well composed and good details are captured!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Hi Josine

Very nice shot. Well balanced lighting and fine frame. Nice work.

Hi Joos, ziet er prettig uit in die warme kleuren en ik voel me hier duidelijk niet platgedrukt door de mensen-massa!
Geen idee hoe groot/zwaar de Canon400D is, hoop dat hij je + ons veel plezier gaat geven.
TFS
Els
:)volgen

Hi Josine,

Excellent shot! Very symmetrical and well balanced composition as well as lighting. The perspective is great and the staircase leads the eye in to the top.
Well done! Get the new camera soon!
TFS,
Vassilis

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  • Viking Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 63 N: 782] (4383)
  • [2007-05-06 10:09]

Joos geweldig gedaan meid! Koop maar gauw die camera! xx
Rob

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1679 W: 0 N: 1] (10933)
  • [2007-05-06 13:12]

Hallo Josine
Mooi simetrisch in beedl gebracht.
Erg mooie comp.
Gr Jos
P**

Hi Josine, it is great, it is very effective with a very nice light control and perspective.
Cheers
Evan

Great graphical effect! Good composition with the symmetry.Well done!
Regards,
chiping

Hello Joos, Perfect symmetrical shot. Liked the warm colors here and the lighting effect. TFS

Hugs, Vandana

follows

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  • loumi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 58 W: 1 N: 20] (260)
  • [2007-05-25 20:11]

Great magestic stairs. Rich tones and perfect lighting. TFS
loumi

hello Josine

Nice to meet you and this image is stunning. I love the colour and the balance here. Well seen and captured.

TFS kind regards Helen

Hello Josine! Nice warm photo, How did you get it with no people? Hope you are having a nice summer! Been extra hot here but like it better than winter! Take care Don

Hoi Josine,
Een mooie symmetrische plaat met mooi licht er in. De sfeer blijft goed bewaard in deze foto. Qua architectuur ook een goede inzending.
groeten,
Joop!

Excellent Josine. Well composed, good repetitions, lovely textures and beautiful light. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Foggy Days II’

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1738 W: 5 N: 382] (1348)
  • [2007-06-09 13:43]

I wonder which rule to follow to go up? LHD or RHD????

Nice shot has been taken with an interesting perspective. Golden warm hue in domination is fantastic. Fine details and nice point of view. Well done Josine.

Thanks for sharing this image.

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  • sleger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 564 W: 57 N: 181] (3549)
  • [2007-06-09 22:29]

Hello Josine

Nice picture. Very good POV. I like the symetry.

TFS

I think you might have better quality pictures with the 30D than with the 400D. I think the 30D is more proffesional in its features.

Regards, Sylvain

Hai Josine,
Erg mooie compositie, moet daar toch eens gaan winkelen. Ben benieuwd hoe de "moeder"van Hans eruitziet. :)
Gr, Jacqueline

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  • HaBeMa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 686 W: 142 N: 633] (3060)
  • [2007-06-11 16:45]

Hi Josine;very quality stairs,and this lighs very hot colors,good composition....
Habema.
:-]

Hi Josie. It was so nice to hear from you. I keep on missing your new photos and this one is stunning. I love the colours and the light. The symmetry is excellent and so well captured.

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  • Jens Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 661 W: 55 N: 1216] (4623)
  • [2007-06-17 20:15]

Hallo Josine
Great shot, I like the colors very much, interesting photo, it catch my eyes. Well done.
Best regards
Jens.

excellent exposure... fantastic photo

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3365 W: 284 N: 6425] (23856)
  • [2007-06-22 4:39]

Fascinating textures in this! I love the way you have handled the light as well
And thanks so much for your kind visit to my "One Year on TrekLens" posting
TFS
silke
(back with :)

Saludos Josine

encantador trabajo me da nostalgia


Nat

joosje je bent het helemaal, zeer warme en mooie foto :-)
groetjes ven eddy&linda alles gaat lekker bij jou ook anders maak je zo geen mooie pics!

Hi Josine,
Nice colors and light, beautiful symmetry and framing.
TFS
Regards...

Hoi Josine,
I really like the lighting here and I think you did well to capture the mood it creates with a relatively long exposure (1/20th sec) and a small aperture (f:8), hand-held and more or less avoid any camera shake. Good composition,colour, angle and point of view.
Well done!
Best wishes
Bill

Hi Josine
Simple and elegant composition. The warm colours add to the mood of the image.
I'm sure this presentation could also be done in B&W.
Very well seen.

Paul

I get to use my brother's 20D and I love it!

Hi Josine,
What a wonderful shot, Madame! John's camera has got into the rightest hands. :) I'm amazed by the sweet golden tone You captured and the nice symmetrical lay-out of the whole compo. I don't like the textured frame, but this is personal. Big congrats and of course, tfs. Best wishes, László

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  • salmi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 850 W: 5 N: 430] (4732)
  • [2007-10-23 4:07]

Hello Josine,
This picture is amazing...symmetrical, with great light and colors, just excelent done!
Thank you.
Mihaela

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  • karith Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 929 W: 44 N: 843] (5708)
  • [2007-10-23 12:54]

Colors like this always attract me, and also interesting architecture with form and features working together. The light in this image adds a warm glow that is often missing in shopping malls. Most of all, I like the lines of all the physical elements in this composition...a visual puzzle that creates the whole. Super!

very good symetry and framing in this photo josine :)
nice depth and details
the lines are very good :) well seen and composed

koh

Hi Josine,
Cool picture. Great idea. I like you POV. TFS
Mandie

Anjhello Scoring System:
DOF - 3 POV - 3 CREATIVITY - 3 COMPOSITION - 3
LIGHTING - 3 SHARPNESS - 3 COLORS - 3

Average: 3.00

Range:
1 point: Average < 1.99
2 points: Average > 2.00

Scoring System:
1 Good 2 Better 3 Best

tfs!

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3048 W: 568 N: 3412] (15117)
  • [2007-11-09 16:20]

Hi Josine,
A photo studio could not be better! Excelelnt use of interior lighting. I like the symmetry and the superb colors and textures. Very nicely done! Have a nice weekend! Annie

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4185 W: 222 N: 3821] (28048)
  • [2007-11-16 20:49]

Hi Josine

This one grabbed my attention. Wonderful colour contrasts, between the amber & light blue. Superb lead in lines, & diminishing linear perspective, with excellent sharpness & pov. Tfs!

Hello Josine!

A great shot of yours! TFS.

THIS IS VERY BEAUTIFUL SHOT. EXCELLENT COMPOSITION.

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1429 W: 12 N: 687] (9376)
  • [2008-04-24 18:50]

Hi Josine,
A beautiful symmetry you captured here. The colours are lovely.
Sunil

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