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into the night


into the night
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Copyright: kristy van der staal (kristies) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 159 W: 0 N: 26] (1468)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-11
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Decisive Moment, Pets, Experimental, Nocturnal, Mood
Camera: panasonic DMC FZ30
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-05-14 4:43
Viewed: 451
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Experimenting a little with photo-shop. The background was already a bit dark. I made in darker, did nothing with the swan.. I am curious what you think about it
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Bonjour,
Belle atmosphère, essai intéressant.
Bonne journée.
clnaef.

hi Kristy..
Beautiful swan .. light and black background, in this view are giving very interesting effect!!
Good photo!!

m..



m..

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (12003)
  • [2007-05-14 6:19]

Hallo Kristy
Mooi comp alleen jammer dat de snuit een beetje wegloopt in het donkere vlak.
Gr Jos

Hi Kristy,

Nicely composed, and I like the water reflection. Maybe you set BG too dark, causes the swan face is mixed with BG, and not clearly shown the eye, it's my opinion.
With the speed of 1/500 and f/6.3, it is sufficient light to capture the swan much clearer, again it's my observation. Hope you don't mind.

Tfs,
Tjutjut

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1510 W: 123 N: 2177] (19961)
  • [2007-08-15 14:22]

Hello Kristy, an interresting concept, very moody. Maybe would have been better with the head a little lighter. Thanks !

Mario

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