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selfportrait
Photo Information
Copyright: Rachelle Blom (Rchl) (180)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-06
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-07-20 3:09
Viewed: 531
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
alweer een zelf portret! sorry;)
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nice self portrait, and PP too. you maybe just used blur on your skin a bit too hard, all the picture seems to miss the focus...

nice anyway

tfs

Olivier

Beautiful self-portrait, Rachelle. I like the pose and the close framing of the subject. The tone is fine w/ very good exposure.
TFS,
Freddie :)

***** POV
***** Focus
***** Exposure
***** Composition
**** Impact
*** Note

  • Great 
  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1519 W: 1 N: 143] (12187)
  • [2007-07-20 3:22]

goed portret..zacht Z/W

  • Great 
  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 384 W: 119 N: 610] (4027)
  • [2007-07-20 3:37]

Heel mooi!! Alleen is het jammer dat je mond onscherp is... Maar het blijft nog steeds een mooie foto! Je ogen komen heel mooi uit!

haha, ik zie dat je ook een foto hebt met als titel "just me"...leuk!

Janneke

This is a lovely self portrait Rachelle! Well done!

Great self portrait. Nice details and PP work/focusing.

  • Great 
  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 944 W: 76 N: 432] (7559)
  • [2007-07-20 14:24]

Great portrait of a beautiful model :)
better if mouth was in focus

No problem - you're photogenic and this is an excellent self portrait! Great metering and depth of field, sharpness is perfect on your eye and the composition is just right.
Very well done
Rew

Hi Rachelle
fine portrait
Karl

Hi rachelle I like this photo. İt's very nice smile cool...TFS

Hi Rachelle,
This is a spectacular self-portrait. The DOF and composition give it character. An excellent choice for B&W. Congratulations!

-JD

For fun I have created a workshop. Hope you don't mind!

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