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Mother-Daughter-Day Part 2


Mother-Daughter-Day   Part 2
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Copyright: Janneke de With (Jan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 119 N: 606] (3983)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-11
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Fuji Finepix S7000
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): A point of view [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-08-18 12:20
Viewed: 1476
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 52
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
On our Mother-daughter-day we had a lot of fun making photo's of each other and do crazy stuff. Like loud singing in the car, jumping in the sand, build a sand-castle, talking about boys......(That's what you can do on a mother-daugther day! :))

This photo is ofcourse of my daugther Vivianne. :)

Thanks for watching!! Have a nice weekend you all!!

Janneke

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which one is the mother? Janos

Hi Janneke,
congrats - to this perfect shot and to such a pretty daughter. I love the light and her nice smile. Thanks and greetings
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Hi Jan,

thats a really nice and energetic picture!!! Beautiful colors and sharpness.. well done. POints now! ;)
Cheers. LuDivine

Excellent compo, colors and atmosphere. Very dynamic.

TFS,

Andreea

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1578 W: 118 N: 3602] (14419)
  • [2007-08-18 12:53]

Hello Janneke
I love this one also... Its just a very joyful shot.. I really love her shadow..
(she can really jump!)

Tricia

this mother - daughter day I like the idea!

hi
more brightness, good ;) even if this shot works less IMO
regards
jo

Excellent timing and good sharpness along with the vivid colours makes this a great shot, I also love the small shadow cast on the ground! Nice work.

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1200 W: 38 N: 2068] (11912)
  • [2007-08-18 13:08]

Great shot and not that easy technically, great colours and saturation - everything is perfect here.
I'm wondering if you can do similar shot closer to water may be and from low POV so thats all wee can see is person ( your daughter in this case) against just sky only - that could be kind unique too...
Anyway thanks for this terrific photo.
Tom

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  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1088 W: 119 N: 1919] (9520)
  • [2007-08-18 13:25]

This is soooooo cool Janneke!
This just a very good image and it has great colors and sharpness.
I really like this idea... not just the image, but also the mother-daughter day! That is soooo cool.
Funny thing is, that both the image and the mother-daughter-day thing are nothing new, but I really like this visualisation of it!
Nice work!
:-)

Cheers,
Anneke

Hello Janneke,

Your daughter is a beautiful lady and your job is superb!

My congratulations twice.

TFS.

(*) I made a workshop and hope you like it!
Sergio

Hello Janneke!
Another wonderful shot!!!
Perfect composition and great colours, detail, clarity!
Beautiful work!
Excellent done, again!
Regards!
Lili

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 942 W: 73 N: 393] (7189)
  • [2007-08-18 16:14]

great capture, nice timing
good comp and colours

Hello Jan.

Excellent capture and great fun with a great stoey well composed aND CAPTURED PHOTO, EXCLLENT DETAILS VERY CRISP WELL DONE AND tfs kYLE

Hello Janneke
Everything about this shot works for me. The aerial pose, the location of the horizon, great lighting and skin tones - even the smallish birdlike shadow. Well done.
Regards,
Greg

mooi vervolg op deel 1
erg scherp en kleurrijk

Hoi Jan deze is ook heel goed omdat het gezicht van je dochter beter uit komt,maar toch...die andere(1) slaat echt alles.
jan

excellent shot!!!
How she did it?
Very nice viev
regards
Alina

prachtige uitwerking, janneke
Erg scherp bevroren beeld,mooie kleurtonen en een prachtig model ook uiteraard :)

groeten,
Stefaan

Hi Janneke,
This one is as good as the other one of your daughter . I like her hair in the air and her shadow on the sand . You are lucky to have a so nice model . Perfectly done . I just took a look on your galery and you can be proud of your children .
Daniel

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  • Mas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 59 W: 62 N: 250] (2555)
  • [2007-08-20 6:12]

Hoi Jan (and Viv) !

Sparkling, fresh, beautiful, bright, funny, always an original point of view, very young & young ;-), enthousiastic, sharp.
This about the picture ánd the both of you !

TFS !
Mas

I like the shadow ! It proves that Viv can jump real high !
Two things are missing: the rings

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3362 W: 86 N: 2738] (18097)
  • [2007-08-21 4:25]

Hallo Janneke.
Een echte wowow.!
Zowel voor jouw dochter als voor de photo. Perfect shot.!
Bravo.
Jan

Instantly really effective
excellent POV details and colors
well-done Jan


TFS sERGIO

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2210 W: 59 N: 2455] (13837)
  • [2007-09-03 11:47]

I love this one... Your daughter is a so beautiful and you've captured this shot so well.
Congratulations, George

(*From now, this one is in my favorites photos)

Anjhello Scoring System:
DOF - 3 POV - 3 CREATIVITY - 3 COMPOSITION - 3
LIGHTING - 3 SHARPNESS - 3 COLORS - 3

Average: 3.00

Range:
1 point: Average < 1.99
2 points: Average > 2.00

Scoring System:
1 Good 2 Better 3 Best

tfs!

nice jump of a beautiful yong woman ! good colours and expressions ! well done

daniel

Hi Janneke...great photo of your lovely daughter. Nice composition and lighting...

Roger

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