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Almost Autumn....


Almost Autumn....
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Copyright: Janneke de With (Jan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 118 N: 596] (3892)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-09
Categories: Friends/Family
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Mijn Treklens foto's 2006-2007 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-09-09 12:15
Viewed: 376
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Today we went for out first autumn photo's to the local park here in Enschede. Me and my brother. We made a lot of portret photo's. Sometimes with a timer, mostly by hand :)This photo was made with the camera of my brother, a canon 350D. I wanted to try it and play with it, and I did!

This photo shows us the first marks of the autumn in Holland in a portetphoto...:)

PP-work:
Some contrast, colorize and a little frame.

Greetings Janneke
ps. Thank you Alex, for the great photo shoot!!
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  • Great 
  • rm_ (62)
  • [2007-09-09 12:16]

Nice... i like it!

  • Great 
  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1084 W: 120 N: 1840] (9174)
  • [2007-09-09 12:57]

A very nice portrait Janneke and I really think it's excellent in B/W.
Very good POV and light.

Cheers girl!
Anneke

me encanta esta fotografía! ahora quiero ver la galería.. saludos

Great expression, wonderful angle and I like the fall as the background...

Hey Janneke
Mooi portret!!
Ik vind het standpunt dat je hebt gekozen ook erg goed... meer, meer, meer!

Willienda

Hi Janneke!
Very nice portrait, expressive look.
Regards!
Renzo

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 113 W: 50 N: 234] (1929)
  • [2007-10-06 3:22]

Haha, toch leuk zo'n foto van jezelf
Ben er erg blij mee!!

Alex

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  • pdp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 33 N: 118] (512)
  • [2007-10-09 12:49]

Hello Jan, this is a great shot. It's different for a start. I really like the POV. The composition is very tight but it tells us everything we need to know about the model position and setting with the most minimal of elements. His pose looks really natural too, I'm impressed. Excellent work!

Personally I would omit the text, but that is a personal preference.

What a cute capture of your bro, Jan! Lovely natural expressions from him. I like his eyes and hair highlights :) Lovely tone you used here. Love the tight crop or the framing of your shot. The text is unobtrusive and strategically put. Very well done!
TFS,
Freddie :)

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