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Copyright: Anneke Hoeksma (maranoa) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 85 W: 0 N: 17] (309)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-02-13
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Beach views [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-03-30 4:32
Viewed: 1291
Favorites: 4 [view]
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
We wonen in Oosten van Nederland, maar elke keer als we bij vrienden op bezoek gaan in het Westen, willen we even de zee ruiken. Het is hier zondagmiddag en het loopt al tegen de avond, we genieten van de zee net als onze dieren.


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Welcome to TL! Good, interesting depth of field and low POV- were you laying down?!
Well cropped and framed.

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  • joker Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 81 W: 17 N: 45] (889)
  • [2005-03-30 4:50]
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Welcome to TL! What a superb first contribution! This is as great as simple. Two men and a dog on an endless land. It's so poetic, somehow it reminds me 'Knocking on the heaven's door', its mood and atmosphere. I like every detail here, its duotone colours palette and light and shallow DOF - just excellent!
Goes to my favs

POV and selective DOF are very good here....
to have focused the light part in first plane increases the contrast with the more dark and far away part.... the two persons seem realy in another plane.....
well done
Paolo

Beautiful, the simple one's are always the best.
Great pov.
Welcome to TL, and thanks for sharing.

What a grand entry this is to start your additions to this web. It looks so familiar to me and it's almost feels like being there. Welcome to you on TrekLens Anneke.
A very nice photo indeed! The good DOF (depth of field) draws the view over the beach, the horizon is softly broken by the two people and the dog. The warm and simple colortones make the image a nice view to look at. I agree with joker, same impression.
I think your border is in good proportions, to me a little bit to modern but still it looks right. Not to thick and not to small. The cutout you made fits the composition well.
Good photo, love to see your future postings.
Richard

Hi Anneke, a great shot, wonderful PP work you did here.

Looking forward to seeing more postings from you

Marleen

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-03-31 8:08]
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Bravo pour cette première très atmosphérique photo du bord de mer ... bienvenue sur TL!

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2744 W: 369 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2005-04-01 16:50]
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Wandelen met de hond op het strand... prachtig! Ik vind je scherptediepte heel goed, de voorgrond in focus en de wandelaars onscherp... en de horizon op de bovenste 1/3de lijn. Prachtige kleur ook. Een mooie eerst post op TL Anneke, wees welkom. TFS (Thanks for sharing).

This is a nice post. I like the figures being out of focus in the background as it adds a real feeling of depth. But some info on the picture would have been nice.

Great sense of DOF and cropping. It is very intimate to see the stir in the water and three? approaching figures. Your photos speak! Great stuff.

Great composition Anneke love the way you have the horizon in the upper part of the picture. The two figures and the dog really add to the picture too. Great capture. TFS

Peter

WOW Great composition. Beautiful photos !!

Hi Anneke,
Almost a story in this composition.
Two men and a dog in the 'desert'!
The low PoV is very nice.
I like the sharp reflections in the foreground.

Garo

wow. amazing photo, it has everything, and very well done, i specially love the focus and the compositon :) awesome

This photo could easily be used as a book-cover. You did very well with this photo Anneke, I'd love it if I could say that I took this photo. I guess I'll have to re-arrange my favourites so I can add this one too it. And by the way, fantastic POV... really nice angle, adds a lot too the photo.

Truly aspiring.

Biance.

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