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Distraction


Distraction
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Copyright: Simone Beijeman (S-moon) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 256 W: 29 N: 241] (1557)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-01-07
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon Powershot SD450
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-01-08 12:03
Viewed: 516
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi everybody,

At first sight the attention is drawn to the blurred dog in the middle. A second look shows the real focus. In this photo my focus was on the piece of wood in the upper part of the photo and the ground in the front.
Focus at these parts and you'll find the blurry dog not such a destraction as at first sight.

Simone

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Hoi Simone,
Dat hondje ken ik :-)Je opzet is prima, het idee van een onscherp hondje is opzich ook niet verkeerd, hoewel ik er voor gekozen zou hebben om het scherp af te beelden. Je keuze voor zwart-wit is uutstekend en je compositie perfect. Ook de presentatie met het donkere frame vind ik geweldig. Kortom een hele fijne inzending. Je gaat goed op TL, leuk om te zien :-)
Groet uit Haarlem,
Hans

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1567 W: 119 N: 3631] (14778)
  • [2008-01-12 13:37]

Hello Simone
I like that the pup is not your main focus.. it shows us that he came running to see just what you are doing...

Tricia

Mooi stuk hout.Het zal van een mooie heining zijn. Gelukkig kan het hondje er nog onder door.
Gr
Cynthia

This is an awesome shot Simone,
I love the expression from the Dog,
And that leads you through the diagonals to the foreground,
Well done!
- Vincent

hallo Simone
ik heb geprobeerd te focussen op dat wat je voorstelde, wat ik ook probeer het lukt me niet, de hond begint bizarre bewegingen te maken, geweldig! groetjes Joke

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 121 W: 52 N: 250] (2050)
  • [2008-01-29 23:17]

He Simone,

Het is een mooi plaatje maar vind het wel jammer dat de hond niet scherp is en de plank/hek wel.

Simone, firstly thankyou for your critique - praise indeed from such an accomplished photographer - thanks :)
I REALLY enjoyed looking through your gallery - your photos are AMAZING! you have a real eye for photography.
This photo is great - your point of view is unique and contrast, composition and clarity superb - congratulations!!!

Hi Simone,
An interesting and creative try and result is a shot that I wish I would have taken it:)
Tfs,
Taner.

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