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Cardrops


Cardrops
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Copyright: Rob Zwemmer (alvaraalto) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 150 W: 50 N: 190] (1386)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-03
Categories: Artwork, Experimental, Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): manipulation majeure [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-01-19 6:15
Viewed: 495
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Feel The Raindrops

I am injured and confused
feel the pressures of my youth.
In my innocence they drag me down

there is nothing left to lose.

I feel the raindrops on my head

Watch the sun 'til my eyes turn red

Still I can hear those things you said
you said.

Through the rain I feel your tears

Helps me beat these endless years.
Just one feeling lingers that of sorrow

Now I'm screaming
no one hears.
I feel the raindrops on my head
. . .
I feel the raindrops on my head
. . .
I feel the raindrops on my head
. . .
You said
you said
you said
you said.

The adventures


I used two pictures:
One reflections of facades in a car and one with raindrops on a table. I removed the background of the raindrops and made the drop transparent. I made the two pictures a layer of a new picture. I added a touch of blue to the raindrops and a touch of green to the layer with the carflection. Then I joined the two layers and resized the picture to 600*800
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Impressive HPP. Your creativity is highly inspiring. I like the idea, colors and reflection. Very useful note/tips, as well. Thank you for sharing,
Ramdan.

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  • LarZ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 99 W: 0 N: 60] (313)
  • [2008-01-19 6:45]

Hi Rob,
Mooie blauwe regendruppels boven de spiegeling in die Haagse ministersauto (misschien ook wel zo'n slurpbak). Past ook mooi bij een dag als vandaag. Mooi passend geel randje trouwens.
Groeten,
Lars

hi Rob
very good HPP, TFS the recipe ;)
regards
jo

ERg Bizondere wijze om regen vast te leggen.Knap gedaan en mooie kleur.
Gr Frans

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1367 W: 0 N: 1665] (13521)
  • [2008-01-19 12:25]

Ongelofelijk hoe veel er te zien is in deze foto van iets waar ieder mens zo voorbijloopt,heel knap Rob.
jan

Hallo Rob.
Wow, dat ziet er een heel stuk beter uit dan de thumbnail doet vermoeden.
Really stunning photo.! Excellent PP work.
Deserves much more attention.
10 point from Jan

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2734 W: 263 N: 864] (8651)
  • [2008-01-20 9:40]

Nice work of art! Great concept.A lot of work with the layers! Very interesting result.Very well done! TFS
Michel

Hello Rob,
You are creative in creating PP and this one is very graphical indeed. The building is well layered against those droplets in good clear image.
Regards,
Jusni

Hello Rob,
A fine abstraction!
...that is not so abstract after all, and a closer analysis will reveal the whole story...
A clever mix, in particular the colours match well!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Hoi Rob,
Impressive PP-work again, your ideas are great and the results like in this 'car drops' picture is stunning. Yhanks for the explanation in your note, I'm really going to try this once too. The added green and blue colours are a finishing touch I think!
Stunning posting Rob!
Hans

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2744 W: 369 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2008-01-23 11:50]

Alweer een mooie creatie, Rob. Mooi om naar te kijken, een goed idee ook. Vooral de manier waarop de druppels transparant zijn gemaakt, maar toch duidelijk hun vorm behouden hebben, spreekt me erg aan.
TFS

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