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urban abstract
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Copyright: jonathan hart (jonathanhart) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1441 W: 225 N: 1164] (9947)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-25
Categories: Transportation, Abstract, Action, Nocturnal
Exposure: f/2.8
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): >my abstract photos [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-01-20 4:15
Viewed: 424
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
after natural abstract...
a quite missed panning as it's not perfectly straight and nothing is in the focus...
but I did not delete the photo as the result was funny & interesting for my tastes...
crtiquers, don't be afraid to be honest, i'm sure it's not in everybody's tastes !
(train taken from a street near the station of Delft)
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To LarZ: hijonathanhart 1 01-20 12:35
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Hi Jonathan,

I like it not every photo has to be technically brilliant, sometimes it is nice to break all the rules and come up with something differnt. That is art.

Cheers
Tom

Hello Jonathan,

I really like this p[OV alot well composed and captured photo excllent cork

TFS Kyle

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  • ninaL Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 6 N: 2] (182)
  • [2008-01-20 10:14]

Salut, Jonathan.
J'aime bien celle-là, avec de belles effets de la vitesse et avec des couleurs sombres mais prononcées, une belle ambiance.
Amitiés, Grazyna.

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  • LarZ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 104 W: 0 N: 60] (313)
  • [2008-01-20 11:46]
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Hi Jonathan,
For a panning photo, the result isn't very good ;-), but I tried it myself in Paris and I didn't succeed either. I find it quite hard...
But I do like the effect of the light here. Nice warm colour in the foreground, a dark blue background and a train in the middle that still can be recognized. I like the result, thanks for sharing!
Regards,
Lars

Bonsoir JC :)

J'en ai des comme ça en réserve aussi :) Tu as bien fait de la publier, j'aime bien l'effet de vitesse qu'apporte le flou ... de plus les tons sont jolis !
Bises et bonne nuit
Marylou

Hi Jo,

In any condition, capturing this fast moving train from a moving car, is not possible to get sharper image . . but you have done it for illustration how fast is this vehicle . .
Lovely lighting movement . .
Yes, it's an artwork . . kind of painting of the light . .
Well done my friend

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Many thanks for your kind words on Breakfast time .

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2096 W: 379 N: 2059] (22066)
  • [2008-01-21 8:09]

Merhaba myfriend Hart...
Original composition. Amazing moment, Very good night shot..bravo...selamlar

Hi Jo, fascinating abstract composition with great colors and wonderful light, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hi Jonathan,
Excellent abstract work and composition.
Well capture and colours.
Well done.TFS
Greetings
H.Ayhan
:)

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 257 W: 56 N: 356] (3091)
  • [2008-01-23 18:15]

Hi Jonathan,I certainly get the sense of movement & it works as an abstract image,though it is easy to tell that it is a train.


Ron

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