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Razorsharp or pencilsharp?


Razorsharp or pencilsharp?
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Copyright: Anneke Reiss (Ejtaan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1086 W: 120 N: 1843] (9192)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-24
Categories: Macro
Camera: Nikon D-70, 18-70 Nikkor DX
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/8 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-01 12:47
Viewed: 427
Points: 54
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi folks,

I know, I know... it's been done thousands of times before. I just had to try this myself.
Just to see what my camera is capable of... and.... to see it works ok again...
Obviously it does!

Increased saturation and a little sharpness, cropped and added the frame.

Hope you like this!
Anneke

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To macromania: forgot...Ejtaan 1 04-02 07:09
To Silke: biiiiiiigEjtaan 1 04-01 22:47
To shelbeesmom: sharpGreenBaron 1 04-01 14:58
To korbee: mee eens...Ejtaan 1 04-01 13:06
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Heb al diverse potloodfotoos gezien op Tl,en deze is kwa scherpte en detail zeer hoog peil.
De ondergrond vind ik wat ongelukkig(liever glad zwart),maar toch....goed werk Anneke.
jan

Hi Anneke, As you say "done many times before" but this is certainly one of the best!Love your composition, colours and "sharpness"! TFS Pat.

Hoi Anneke,

Prachtige scherpe foto, ook mooi gekleurd!

Groet,
Gerard

Hoi Ennie,
Lekker scherp man, doet bijna pijn zo scherp. Kan niet scherper, want dit is scherper dan scherp an scherp gezien om het scherpe geheel zo scherp in een frame te zetten.
Scherp gezien joh!
Scherpe Hansie

Hi Anneke,
Of course there is nothing wrong with trying it yourself as long as it is differently presented and in a lovely way it 'll always be very acceptable .I certainly like what i see and your camera works fine .Next time try an overview with them pointing upwards for a change of pov ,it might look interesting and perhaps not as popular ,
TFS ,
Carol

Hello Anneke !

Cool variation on a familiar theme . But indeed very sharp ! Well captured and composed.

Although I must say , I do not encourage big titles like these on borders. I found them too distractive. But it is only my opinion. Nothing to do on the photo itself that I love.

Cheers!
Robert

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2046 W: 135 N: 3062] (16547)
  • [2008-04-01 13:53]

I sure like it, :D the idea is old, but the end result is always different!! Excellent sharpness, I like the details, great contrast and DOF, very nice shot my friend, :D

Cheers,
Sweety

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2390 W: 0 N: 770] (12756)
  • [2008-04-01 14:27]

Hola Anneke,
precioso trabajo,
hermosos colores y bella presentación,
magnífica idea,
saludos

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3300 W: 267 N: 6202] (23100)
  • [2008-04-01 14:33]
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Of course it works -- it's a Nikon!
Great details, fine colours, excellent composition

TFS
silke

Bonsoir Anneke,
you don't find that the tests of camera are always moments of joy for us and for those which benefit from your sharing, one wants to make as well as you after, even if that seems difficult to me with your very well shot. To still carry out tests without stop, it's to learn and grow.
I find as one to seek the good adjustments, one win in experiments, inventiveness and simplicity. All is there in your POV.
Superb focus painstaking, I like much the details of the wood of the pencils, and the colors are beautiful on their backgrounds
Congratulations. Best regards
Corinne

Both!! outstanding shot Anneke! Love the colors! Superb!
B-)
Linda

Hi Anneke,
Love this! The colors and the sharpness of not only the pencils but the photo, textures awesome. Nice work. TFS
Donna:o)

nice composition

No matter what sharp it is but it really is a sharp shot, well framed and cropped.. thanks

aK

Pin sharp detail Anneke, good composition and colours.

Regards Mark :)

Hi Anneke,

A great shot . . Beautifully composed . .
Colors are naturally presented here . .
Excellent idea capturing these pens . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Hi Anneke...great composition...perfect sharpness...nice colors.

Roger

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1385 W: 122 N: 1975] (16659)
  • [2008-04-02 19:10]

Hello Anneke, very sharp macro with beautiful colors and a great composition, very well done, thanks!

Mario

Inderdaad een klassiek plaatje, maar toch weer niet zoals je ze hier presenteert.
Goede dof en kleuren.
Een klein stukje van het kleed waarop ze liggen, is nog scherp te zien. Die zou je weg kunnen klonen, zodat dat stukje óók onscherp is ... maarruhhh ... je zou het ook niet kunnen doen natuurlijk. :-)
groeten,
Joop!

Hi Anneke

Its both and its superb.. and it may have been done before but every photgraphers shot is individual. This is wonderful with excellent colours but best of all is the texture

TFS kind regards Helen

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1133 W: 60 N: 189] (23399)
  • [2008-04-10 12:22]

Nice sharpeness, good idea and pleasant effect.

Iso.

Hi Anneke.
Prachtige gedaan werkelijk een beauty van een opname.
topper.
Gr Frans

Ja en toch heb ik zo één nog niet gezien. Iedereen geeft er net weer een eigen draai aan!

Deze had ik gemist, maaaar ik heb net ontdekt dat je een mail kunt krijgen met je daily favourites, was ik niet eerder achter - dat maakt het een stuk makkelijker om alles in de gaten te blijven houden - beter laat dan nooit dan maar.

Heel mooi, heel scherp en vooral lekker kleurig - die camera werkt uitstekend!

TFS
Els

Hi Anneke,
Beautiful composition,very good sharpnes,good light.
Best regards,
Ralf

They are some kind of sharp, that's for sure. I like the clarity and the composition!
Tracy

love the title anneke :)
the square frame is perfect for this
very well composed and excellent idea :)

koh

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 113 W: 50 N: 234] (1929)
  • [2008-05-05 13:03]

He Anneke,

Erg leuk gepresenteerd deze foto.
Heb zelf ook al een keer gestoeid met potloden.
Deze mag er wezen!

Groetjes Alex

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