<< Previous Next >>

...a Litlle Outside Inside...


...a Litlle Outside Inside...
Photo Information
Copyright: Simone Beijeman (S-moon) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 252 W: 29 N: 238] (1529)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-25
Categories: Macro, Abstract
Camera: Canon Powershot SD450
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-29 12:58
Viewed: 616
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 84
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This 'drop' has a little bit of outside inside...Blue weather, trees and even the sun!...I think that made it more beautiful...

This macro was taken on the same table as The Most?... . The sun was shining so I've put my camera on 'contrast - 1' so the photo got darker when I took it.

PP work:
Added contrast, clarify, cropped and framed.

Thanks for Watching and let me know what you think!

Simone

A-lex, Jong, black_dream, ARGI, roald, sharinawati, manujmehta, Vaibhav27, kokos101, Tomek has marked this note useful
Only registered TrekLens members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To wbriques: Hi WellingtonS-moon 1 06-22 13:50
To poulinp: ThanksS-moon 1 05-03 04:03
To Jan: Hey Janneke,c-ynthia 2 04-30 02:01
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

  • Great 
  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 117 W: 52 N: 244] (2000)
  • [2008-04-29 13:02]

Hi Simone,

Great shot! I love the way you used the light here! The 'thing' is very sharp. And indeed, I can even see the the blue sky outside!! Well done!

TFS Alex

Lot of a "planetary" view of he world for the moment ! The world in a drop ! Nice texture and great light ! TFS
Jean

  • Great 
  • Kli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 169 W: 5 N: 142] (1247)
  • [2008-04-29 13:16]

Bonjour simone,
J'aime beaucoup la simplicité de ce cliché.
Très beau jeu de lumière. Bravo.
Bonne journée.

Pascalie.

Elegant and clean Simone, yet with a message
and powerful feelign behind it. I like this design
and approach.
Great DOF.
Well executed presentation.
- Vincent

De scherpte van de tafel in het verlengde van de drop vind ik een mooi detail. Net alsof de drop de helderheid aan de tafel geeft.
Mooi gedaan
Groetjes
Cynthia

Hello Simone,

I like this great presented photo, excllent PP wotk here not over processed, excllent details very well presented photo

TFS Kyle

  • Great 
  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 387 W: 119 N: 602] (3967)
  • [2008-04-29 14:10]
  • [+]

Prachtig Simoon!!! Het lijken wel zonnestralen vanachter die gelbol! Krijg je dat effect door een lamp of door het de lijnenstructuur op de tafel?
Mooi scherp!

Jan

preciosa Simone, me gusta mucho,

saludos, nanita

very lovely work. lots of details captured here. lighting is also superb

  • Great 
  • Jong Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 0 N: 245] (2638)
  • [2008-04-29 18:54]

wowwwwww just love the lighting here, great exposure setting. i like the reflection and bottom half of the object. very well done, Simone

Very nice. Well composed, with excellent lighting and exposure.

TFS,
David

Hi there Simone!
amazing still life capture here my friend!
great lighting and POV!
Congratulations!

Ollie DLC

well presented... nice dof and sharp texture... perfect placement of subject. tfs

jowhite

  • Great 
  • ARGI Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 98 W: 2 N: 40] (1131)
  • [2008-04-30 0:54]

Simone a perfect minimal Art piece.
Excellent POV, very clear detailed.
I also like the table texture.
Great light and shadows.
You did a superb work here.
My congratulations
best regards Argyris

simplicity at its best, nice composition, framing and light
regards
jo

  • Great 
  • roald Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 41 W: 53 N: 26] (406)
  • [2008-04-30 3:04]

Hi Simone.

im impressed with the composition. very unique. yes, you can see the trees both on the drop and the reflection.

the note is informative too.

roald

Excellent work Simone! It's delicate yet powerful, mysterious yet clear...It pretty much follows the subtle and expressive line of work you've posted so far. Congrats!
Best regards,
Diana
(**)

Hello Simone.
Very nice image. Interesting light and shadow. I like it.
Best regards,
Sharina

hi , v nice macro, great sharpness and shallow dof, the contrast between the bright reflection and the rest of the image is really nice

rgds
Allen

Hi Simone...
Beautiful art work...
Best regards...
Andro
:-) tomorrow...

Verrry nice and creative! You have a great eye for originality and composition.
There is a nice light refletion on the table and the glass bal is well placed. I like the translucency of it!

Great work!
And thx for your comment on my photo.
Yan :)

Hi Simone,
Wonderful~Image and words..
Excellent touch my dear friend.

Anan

Thanks for your kind words on my "INSECT 2"

Sooo good Simone. Simple, but very beautiful. Did you try in a square format, to eliminate the right dark part?

Amazing work Simone,
just perfect !!!!!
warm regards
biljana

  • Great 
  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1168 W: 60 N: 189] (24120)
  • [2008-05-03 12:43]

Ouf !! It's special. For sure well done. I like very much your presentation Simone.

Iso.

  • Great 
  • tguiz Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 54 W: 16 N: 13] (269)
  • [2008-05-04 9:06]

great focussing and good lighting!!simple but great composition!
regards!

thomas

  • Great 
  • clnaef Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 1035 W: 57 N: 31] (5560)
  • [2008-05-04 23:26]

Bonjour,
Belle composition bien équilibrée.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

hello Simone
wonderful shot
what a combination of light and shadow
beautiful composition
A great shot from Still Life
i like this black and white effect
Nice Deapth Of Field.

God Bless you

regards
manuj mehta

  • Great 
  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 856 W: 0 N: 1381] (5594)
  • [2008-05-05 6:14]

Hi Simone
Got to say I am jealous, as this is one experiment that turned out great. The results of seeing 3 reflections is pretty fantastic.
Bravo great shot
Dot

Bonsoir Simone
Et félicitations ! J'adore ! Je préfère encore celle ci à "the most", mais les deux valent le détour. Le noir et blanc rend cette goutte métallique, c'est un très joli travail.
Cordialement,
Antoine.

Hi Simone,
Lovely shot,
Good use of light,
Nice idea,
Good job,
TFS..

Vaibhav..

I THINK IT IS VERY ATTRACTIVE....
Great compo,love textures and wonderful light....
Simple and incredible.....
Bravo
Claude

hi simone!
this is so wonderful, excellent sharpness and beautiful light.
great play with light and shadows, i like it.
tfs
zoran

pt

  • Great 
  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1199 W: 38 N: 2058] (11854)
  • [2008-05-18 10:58]

Hello Simone:)
This is really great work, artistic effect - I like this so much:)
Best Regards - Tom

Hello Simone,
Beautiful composition,great light with reflection and shadow.
Very nice.wonderful done.

KK-Lenser

Great use of the light - a realy simple subject matter on the surface but made so much more with the reflections. Composition is strong - an almost iconic style.
Thanks for sharing
Mark

wow c'est magnifique!
Ta composition est très originale!! Belle lumière...
Bravo!

SImone,
This is a great shot. Well prepared. It inspired me to prepare my 100`post here at TL :)
Cheers,
Wellington

  • Great 
  • kh_42 (48)
  • [2008-06-23 9:40]

Wow, this is a lovely piece of photography!

Great work, TFS!

Kris

wow for me this is a very nice compo simone, just love it, ive been looking for a nice still life photo here in tl and i would say i found a great one, cant find any points, only for my preference, i would place the ball more to the bottom, tfs

  • Great 
  • Moyano Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 84 W: 1 N: 28] (1728)
  • [2008-07-08 14:56]

Hallo Simone,

Hele mooie plaat! Goede scherpte en 'n sterke compositie. Eentje waar ik kan blijven naar kijken :-)

Groetjes,

Natalia

Beautiful! Great lighting and great darkness! Very well done!
Ed

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF