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Storks at the Artis Zoo


Storks at the Artis Zoo
Photo Information
Copyright: Hans Spruijt (GreenBaron) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3160 W: 799 N: 9736] (38863)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-13
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D70s, Sigma 70-300mm APO DG Macro, Hitachi4GBMicrodrive, 58mm UV
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Amsterdam Zoo Artis, animal portrait [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-04 2:31
Viewed: 452
Points: 86
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Storks at the Artis Zoo

Another impression of the birds of the Amsterdam Artis Zoo. This time two of the storks with mummy on the nest. So baby's are prepared.

The background was a tad dark, so unfortunately the black feathers of the male stork are a bit hidden agains the dark backdrop. Anyway hope you enjoy the picture and if not please show me how to improve!

PP work:
Shot in RAW, minor adjustment of brightness and contrast. Slight crop, converted to JPEG, resized and sharpend, add frame and text.

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Hi Hans
Professinal shot of these lovely birds, very good image quality and DOF. WOW 32500 points!!!
Best Regards, Alireza.

Hi Hans,
Excellent image clarity and sharpness. Color tones is also very good. Well captured and composed ... I like the shallow DOF. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3209 W: 225 N: 6904] (27379)
  • [2008-05-04 2:40]

It is lovely to see these nesting storks Hans. It looks quite a tender moment.
Well captured, and nice and clear to see, TFS
Janice

Hello Hans! Wonderful storks. Wonderful scene. Amazing lightness. Good contrast. Original shot. Good luck!

Hello Hans!
Another beautiful capture in the Artis Zoo!
Perfect light abd good detail!
Best regards!
Lili

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2163 W: 381 N: 2155] (23154)
  • [2008-05-04 2:47]

Merhaba myfriend Dear HANS......
Excellent job with beautiful photo, wonderful colors and a very beautiful...
Selamlar...
Milas...

Cota Leglegan gelek çê hatine kişandin bi sigma 70-300mm.Dimenek xweş e.
Dûrzan.

Hi Hans,

Lijkt me geen probleem die donkere veren tegen de donkere achtergrond.
Prachtige foto.
Glad you could enlighten us about the family life of mum and dad stork ^-^.
Most of the time storks are sitting high up on a nest in the sky.
How come you got such a great POV?

TFS
Els

Hi Hans, Well cropped and clear view of these colourful long legged stork. It is lovely with both paremts proudly caring for the eggs. TFS. Murray.

good poses captured, fine POV, framing, well done composition, and the quality is great
regards
jo

Hi Hans,

Lovely composition . . Els has done great workshop to illuminate a bit to make the black feathers can be seen clearer . .
Great detail of the shot . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Many thanks for your kind words on No need to walk .

Beautiful light and lovely couple.

Hi Hans,
Maravilosa photo,beautiful composition,veri sharp,congratulation.
Best regards,
Ralf

The tad dark BG makes the white birds pop, I like it! The baby is so cute! Nice details Hans! Excellent comp!
B-)
Linda

Beautiful capture.
Excellent sharpness and details.
Am I wrong in saying that I think the back of both birds is a bit washed out?
Not easy to capture white with the sun reflecting.
TFS
Piet.

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 870 W: 0 N: 1402] (5676)
  • [2008-05-04 8:18]

HI Hans
Good capture of these two birds. I agree that the black is a bit hard to see but found that the workshop was helpfull
Dot

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3362 W: 86 N: 2738] (18097)
  • [2008-05-04 8:36]

Oei, Ik zie een beetje OE. Op alle twee nog wel. en dat terwijl jij daar altijd zo op let, Hans.!
Cant have it all. Good looking picture of this couple in love.
Het zwart komt op mijn scherm goed los van de achtergrond, dus geen probleem.
Groeten van Jan

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1200 W: 38 N: 2068] (11912)
  • [2008-05-04 10:52]

Hello Hans:)
I like these birds so much - this is even one of the Polish symbols...
Very nice capture my friend - great to see them again.
Cheers - Tom

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1516 W: 1 N: 131] (11785)
  • [2008-05-04 12:03]

Fijne foto ik hou van een donkere
achtergrond.

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  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1088 W: 119 N: 1919] (9520)
  • [2008-05-04 12:09]

This is cool Hans.. showing good details. Pitty that the background shows so much detail too... Idealy it would be more like a blue sky, but then again.. this is Artis... ;-)

A nice one!

Cheers,
Anneke

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 583 W: 52 N: 660] (4118)
  • [2008-05-04 12:25]

Hi Hans
A nice capture of the storks! As if they were posing for you. Nice POV and sharpness with very good color management
regards
Argiris

Hi Hans,
Excellent shot of a spring scene...
Lovely birds are very colourful...
I like it.tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Hoi Hans,
Staat er weer schitterend op ! Mooie scherp en met een goede compo.
Ik dacht eerst even dat dit achter bij jouw bij de sloot was, maar nu ik beter kijk zie ik Artis.
Knap stukje werk ! .... voor iemand van jouw leeftijd. ;-)
groeten,
Joop!

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3046 W: 568 N: 3415] (15131)
  • [2008-05-04 16:57]

Hi Hans,
Big big nests for these storks! I imagine how they must work hardly to be in time for the baby!
Very clear and sharp portrait. Beautifully done! Annie

Amazing colors! Great composition. I do see that the background is reducing the splendid black feathers of the male bird. They look so elegant. TFS

Lorena

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  • efi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 216 W: 13 N: 165] (3008)
  • [2008-05-04 23:57]

hi hans;
we say that in the beginning of the season if you first see the stork landed you wil not travel a lot..other vise is vice verca.
i can see all the details of the feathers ..super sharp and vivid..thanks fs..

Hello Hans,

We just can't help being anthropomorphic about such scenes! It is so tender and touching!

Fabulous details and very nicely composed.
Just a tad oe on the white but that in no way detracts from the overall effect. I think the tail feathers show up well enough!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

pl :-)

hi Hans,

i almost thought they were real & alive...thanks to the great sharpness & clarity. a very lovey partner indeed...and yes, that ring on the leg tells that they are in captivity in a zoo.

TFS
Regards
Agoes

Zeer knap, haarscherp en knappe kleuren. Mooie presentatie.
David

Superbly composed and colored, Hans! They're so beautiful in yor image that I almost wish I were one, myself! :)
Best regards,
Diana
(**) later! ;)

Hey Hans
On my monitor it all looks really good... I can totally make out the difference of the BG and dark feathers!

Amazing details you have captured...

Tricia

Persoonlijk ben ik niet zo een dierenfotofreak,maar dit retescherpe schouwspel van Mej.Ooievaar kan ik niet omheen Hans.
jan

If storks bring babies to people who brings baby storks to storks????
Great details and colours, although a little over exposed (slightly burnt out in the feathers). The winner for me though is the POV you've used to compose the shot and get both birds in - great stuff
Thanks for sharing
Mark

Nicely executed Hans. Good focus, natural looking colour and splendid details. TFS,
David

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2014 W: 136 N: 3063] (16571)
  • [2008-05-06 0:16]

WOW...

What an image Hans, love the clarity and sharpness, excellent shot, so much details, great lighting too, well captured my dear friend,


Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 358 W: 1 N: 199] (2206)
  • [2008-05-06 3:45]

Hello Hans, this is absolutely a perfect capture of these attractive storc pair. I love these birds and soon I will upload our storcs.
Regards Rose

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3259 W: 375 N: 2713] (11644)
  • [2008-05-06 13:31]
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Hans, I disagree: on my screen the black feathers of the bird really stand out against the backdrop, there's not a single spot where they blend... If you click on the calibration check link on the bottom of this page, can you distinguish the 2 leftmost blocks?
This really is a beauty. How did you get on their height, or was this nest built near the ground? (that would be weird imo).
Excellent sharpness and beautiful details. Nice birds too, aren't they?
TFS

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 280 W: 62 N: 439] (3564)
  • [2008-05-06 22:35]

Hi Hans,strong composition,sharp & detailed with natural colouring,hope you get a shot of the babies:)TFS

Ron

Hoi Hans,

Dat het in de dierentuin is doet niets af aan hoe mooi deze plaat is. Prachtig!! De veren tegen de achtergrond vallen mij heel erg mee. Nog best aardig te zien. Lekker scherp de hele plaat met goede achtergrond blur. Mooi!

Groeten, Dennis

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1056 W: 56 N: 687] (11151)
  • [2008-05-08 0:56]

Hi Hans,
beautiful compo and perfect clarity.Congratulations.TFS.Necla.:)later.

Very sharp and very well taken.
Beautiful !!

Best regards, Daniel

HI Hans,
Wahh..I like to see this Has,Much interesting very nice birdie photo shot..
Excellent detail,everything is there..
Wonderful done my friend.

Anan

Mooie beesten en mooie scherpte. Zijn de hooglichten nou uitgebeten? Altijd lastig, witte veren in de zon.


gr, Pedro

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