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Copyright: Jos Jansen (jawa) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1658 W: 0 N: 1] (10667)
Genre:
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-06
Camera: Canon EOS 350 D
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-07-10 23:53
Viewed: 268
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Dutch]
The little girl is concentration.wish making music.
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She is soo cute and beautifull...
Grat face expression! Well done Jos!

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3295 W: 84 N: 2609] (17493)
  • [2008-07-11 2:57]

Sounds Good, Jos.
Lief plaatje van de Little girl.
Lekker 'colourful'.
Groeten van Jan

Wonderful capture.
I've palyed a bit, see WS, hope you don't m ind

v

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 0 N: 154] (1941)
  • [2008-07-11 5:00]

Hello,

mangigique ce portrait de cette jeune, elle fait un peu la moue, avec s boule vert, le colier des boules colorées, superbe.

Bravo et amitiés

Nicou

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3300 W: 267 N: 6202] (23100)
  • [2008-07-11 5:16]

The look of concentration here is wonderful. And I love the light -- despite the back-lighting, there are no heavy shadows in her face.
My one suggestions would be to crop a little closer to her since the surroundings do not add much to this fine portrait shot
TFS
silke

Bonjour Jos,

C'est vrai elle est pleine d'attention, cela se voit à son regard porté sur l'avant, elle attend le signal!
Des couleurs vives et magnifiques pour ce joli portrait d'enfant!!!
Bon week end
Amitiés
Odile

Hi, Jos, great portrait, so wonderful girl, good capture and colors...

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1505 W: 1 N: 111] (11397)
  • [2008-07-11 9:09]

een aandachtig kind dat zich niet
laat afleiden!

Hi Jos,
Colors...colors... colors...
Marvelous
My compliments...
TFS
Selahattin E

Jos,
very nice light....
and nice isolation!!

nice mood captured.

rgds
pushpinder

Wonderful portrait dear Jos.Nice shot.
Regards.
A.

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2493 W: 51 N: 2938] (13870)
  • [2008-07-13 8:57]

Hi Jos,
Very unique portrait. I like the term and the execution. Well made. The composition is excellent one.
Well done.
Janusz

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  • Maged Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 68 W: 1 N: 80] (735)
  • [2008-07-13 13:14]

Hello Jos
An Pretty Girl , you shot it in perfect time, a lot of meaning in her eyes.
Amazing portrait for kids.
Directly to my Favorite

Best Wishes
Maged

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2100 W: 379 N: 2059] (22110)
  • [2008-07-14 8:02]

Merhaba Myfriend dear Jos..
Excellent job with beautiful photo, wonderful colors and a very beautiful portrait....
Selamlar...
Milas...

Hi Jos,
What a stunning portrait of this beautiful child.Nice colours, light and sharpness.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

Hoi Jos,
De juiste titel !
Een bijzonder goede registratie. De DOF is uitstekend, waarde de "dame" mooi lost komt van de achtergrond. Mooi helder beeld.
groeten,
Joop!

Heerlijk kleurrijk en zonnig portretje Jos, dit popje zit inderdaad even helemaal in gedachten.

Heb net gekeken wat Vlad heeft gedaan en denk inderdaad dat het weghalen van een stuk van de rechterkant de compositie sterker maakt.

TFS
Els

Hi Jos, lovely portrait of cute model with great expression, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hallo Jos.
prachtige opname en zeer goed gezien.

Gr Frans

What a cute girl! She's so precious in her mimic!
Wonderful composition, sharpness and excellent colors!
Best regards,
Diana
p.s. Thank you!

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1500 W: 7 N: 1585] (8708)
  • [2008-07-16 12:45]

Beautiful gril Jos,excellent details and good composed picture.
Greetings.
Eva

Hi Jos
Wonderful portrait of the little girl. I can imagine what she is thinking - very expressive face you have managed to capture. The BG is a bit busy and the WS takes care of that nicely.

Thanks for the recent visit.

Dan

Excellent candid. I can see the real focus of the adorable girl. Great work Jos.
TFS
Dennis

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  • k-2 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 620 W: 6 N: 417] (2655)
  • [2008-07-28 7:09]
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This is a good catch. Even though she is in the middle -- it works. I do not know why it works. The sunlit hair adds to the mood. The blurred BG is good to focus attention on her.
TFS. Karin.
It must be difficult to be an alpinist in the Netherlands. Where do you go hiking?

I somehow missed this fabulous shot here Jos! Super color in this, nice saturation, adoable kid! how can you go wrong! Excellent details!
B-)
Linda

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