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Copyright: Michael Papendieck (MichaelPe) (72)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon 350 D, Cannon 50mm, f1.8
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-12-01 8:22
Viewed: 435
Points: 22
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Welcome to TL Michael with a great shot! Oh to have that body! I used to...not anymore! I think there is a bit too much space on the right side, OR I would have her looking INTO the majority of the frame. Not sure how you cropped this! I like the light from above! Very much like she is on stage! Wonderful tones and color! Very nice work!
Have a great time on TL! Don't take critiques personally and you will meet lots of really nice people here!
B-)
Linda

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  • maecy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 0 N: 257] (1641)
  • [2008-12-01 8:56]

wow! what can I say..its a masterpiece...very nice shot..Congratulations!

Cheers!

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  • Dai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 121 W: 54 N: 115] (761)
  • [2008-12-01 9:04]

Eye catching and interesting pose. Something about the picture draws you in. Welcome to TL.
TFS
Dai

Szia Michael,
very good picture,
moment caught well
likes...
Szia, Laci

Hi Michael,

Very good photo: The colours and the movement... I like the idea of movement in this photo, probably because of the muscles definition... Very well done and wellcome on TL!

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  • Nushy Gold Star Critiquer [C: 145 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2008-12-01 13:02]

Hi Michael,

welcome to TL. I have no words, this is excellent shot. In all aspects...

Best regards,

Nusa

Welcome to TrekLens Michael!

Beautiful shot - great light and contours, nicely composed.

A photographer's note next time would be helpful, too!

Rew

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  • Jong Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 428 W: 0 N: 273] (3168)
  • [2008-12-01 21:40]

love the see the strength and beauty of human body, nice light and details here. welcome to TL, Michael

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1383 W: 0 N: 1684] (13625)
  • [2008-12-02 12:05]

Hallo Micheal das siet ja fabelhaftig aus,sehr sharf and uniques compositione.
jan

beautiful shot.....lovely dancer....nice comp. and lines. good job and welcome to TL.

Hi Michael,
And other beautiful frame.
Great control of exposure and lighting.
Beautiful pose and use of the space.

p.s. your intro
Intro: I take pictures....mainly with my eyes, sometimes with my camera....but always in an emotional, not technical way

What's wrong with technical? To me you're the perfect example of technical, but when you combine emotion and techniques, you do wonders...)) If emotion is the drive, the technique will always remain it's slave.

Hi Michael! In order to help you make the most of your time here in Treklens, it's worth noting some points from the site guidelines.

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