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Neatly Arranged


Neatly Arranged
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Copyright: Britta Doell (Briddl) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 81 N: 229] (934)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-28
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Nikon D40X, AF-S NIKKOR 18-135mm 1:3,5-5,6G ED, hama UV C 67mm XXV
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: Sailing in the Netherlands
Date Submitted: 2009-05-06 10:44
Viewed: 263
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Here is another impression from my trip on an old traditional sailing ship with two of my classes just a week ago.

It was a great experience for the children to learn that you really have to work to get from one harbour to another. They had to help with the sails and all the hawsers on board. And they had to arrange the hawsers neatly to make sure that the next manoeuvre will work.

So I can say that this image shows a common sight on board of traditional sailing ships. And that although my students are mostly great in causing chaos!

To put emphasize on the age of the sailing ship / the historical aspect I changed the image to sepia, cropped away the left part, adjusted contrasts and added frames.

I hope you like what I did. Thanks for having a look. All critiques and comments are welcome.
Have a great rest of the week. Kindest regards, Britta
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Hallo Britta,
Fine composition of this traditional sailing rope, I always love those photos that present an everyday subject, sometimes in special context, sometimes only the subject itself. Fine black and white tones, well aplied narroe DOF. Sepia tones really give it an antique feeling. TFS.
Greetings,
Kristof

Halo Britta,
interessantes Bild. Man muss shon genauer hinschauen um zu erkennen, was es darstellt. Der Alterungsprozess durch Sepia und Rahmen ist dir gelungen. Wirkt fast wie hinter einem alten Glasrahmen.
Von der Frontalansicht bin ich nicht so begeistert. Die gewollte Unschärfe hätte etwas mehr Tiefe verdient. Irgendwie ist die Anordnung der beiden ... eh - .. - sorry, keine Ahnung wie das heißt, zu weit am Bildrand und in der Mitte scheint etwas zu fehlen. Egal wie - take it easy.
Gruss aus dem grauen Süden,
Thomas

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