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only blue jeans
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Copyright: sjoerd blok (SRB) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 106 W: 0 N: 51] (803)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-05-24
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Hasselblad 503 CM, 80mm f4.0, Fuji NPH
Exposure: f/4, 1/60 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-06-27 16:21
Viewed: 1548
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this is a picture of a friend of mine, she wanted me to take her portrait. she didn't wanted the usual things, so we experimented a bit. when i was processing my photo's a came up with the idea to make it an advertising picture. forecast is a jeans brand of the shop where my girlfriend works.
greetz
SRB
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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4232 W: 414 N: 6672] (42147)
  • [2005-06-28 3:49]

Hi sjoerd

The highlights are a little blown out, but the text is well placed, & sharpness, color & saturation, are all excellent. Well done!

It is good compostion for an ad sjoerd - but what I feel it does need a wee bit of tweaking to be called an effective ad layout. I have tried a WS - I hope you don't mind.

Hi sjoerd

Nice pic..i love Jeans and i work in a company like a product manag.
TFS
denis

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  • bujin Gold Star Critiquer [C: 104 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-06-26 13:08]

Hallo Sjoerd,

Een Leuke en prettige reclamefoto, met een goede compo.
Alleen het gezichtsgedeelte had volgens mij iets scherper en doorgetekend kunnen worden.
Voor de rest complimenten en tot ziens,

Jan van den Bos (Bujin, Holland)

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