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Hmmm... potato!


Hmmm... potato!
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Copyright: Janneke de With (Jan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 426 W: 123 N: 721] (4817)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-23
Categories: Daily Life, Food, Friends/Family, Portrait
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-25 10:01
Viewed: 270
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello everybody,

This is my little nice. Last week it was her second birthday! She enjoyed her day, got a lot of presents and she lóves French fries "pomme frites" (in dutch: Patat).

She's got really beautiful eyes and I wanted to show you those eyes. So I decreased the colours of the whole photo except for the eyes.
Also her favorite food, the French fries is still colourfull.

I hope you like the mood that I've tried to accomplish.

Jan
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Happy birthday to the young lady. A love the moment you captured. She seems paused as if to wonder, 'Would these taste better with Ketchup?' Her eyes are indeed a deep blue. Good POV and natural lighting.

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2015 W: 144 N: 3390] (13589)
  • [2009-05-25 16:12]

hi Janneke

A lovely child looking so intuitively away from the lens. I am sure there must be something very interesting at the side where she was looking to catch so much of her attention.

I like this portrait shot although the focus is a bit soft especially around the eyes, it is a cool capture of a child who is always very difficult to shoot.

And you have done it very a child's level for angle.

Good work.

tfs, bill

Hello Janneke!
Excellent PP work and very cute little girl!
Sweet face, lovely eyes!
Great portrait!
Best regards!
Lili

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2630 W: 1 N: 1244] (15359)
  • [2009-05-26 0:20]

Hola Jan,
bella foto,
atractiva niña, precioso momento y detalles,
saludos :))

Hoi Janneke,
Dat ont-kleuren werkt goed. De aandacht gaat nu inderdaad naar de hoofd-onderwerpen: ogen en frietjes.
Je zegt dat je de kleuren hebt ge-encreased, maar je bedoelt "decreased", want je hebt de kleuren er juist uit-gedraaid. Type-foutje.
Mooie compositie en note. Goed werk.
Joop!

Hoi Janneke,
Goed om weer een inzending op TL van je te zien. Prachtig portret van je niggie, inderdaad die ogen zijn sprekend en prachtig blauw. Fijn vastgelegd meissie.
Groet,
Hans

N.B. Ben je inmiddels al een beetje opgeknapt?

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1348 W: 0 N: 1642] (13380)
  • [2009-05-30 8:02]

Er zit eenzekere zachtheid in de scherpte van de foto Jan ,en ik vind de kleuren ook heel apart,tja patat en Mc Donald,nog altijd de grootste kindervrienden;]]

jan

Hi Jan,
Very pretty portrait vith excellent pose.Lovely composition.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

Ze gaat er echt van genieten
Ja het is ook zo lekker die patat

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 259 W: 20 N: 613] (3005)
  • [2009-06-13 9:04]

Hi Janneke,

Very nice candid shot...sharp details.
Beautiful blue eyes...very nice composition.

TFS
Ramon

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