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Rhythm
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Copyright: Adri Padmos (Adri) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 534 W: 23 N: 1875] (11378)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-19
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D80, AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-135mm F3.5-5.6GED, Hama UV 390 (O-Haze) 67mm
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Map: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-03 11:59
Viewed: 230
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello dear TL-friends,

And again I go to "my" beach (see map)!

Under all circumstances I enjoy here
the rhythm of the tide.....
the rhythm of light and shadow.....
the rhythm of the water and sand.....


strong is the water and sand
under my feet
stranded in the blue
of the sea, come

crooked toes
walk the quicksand and get
step by step,
come with me,
I am the sea

I am the sea
warm and meek
play with you
in force and shaking

stay water, stay sea
sand and water
splash and ogle and go
undergo

keep your ripples
and step, step by step
roar down the waves
wobble with me

step by step by step ....


Greetings from Zeeland, Netherlands,
Adri

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Hoi Adri,

Prachtig licht zeg! Mooie zandpatronen. Knap werk!


Groetjes,

Nathalie

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1302 W: 2 N: 202] (15658)
  • [2009-06-03 12:30]

prachtige foto met de natuur als kunstenaar

Hi Adri
Marvelous capture,beautiful view.
Very nice colours,great lighting and sharpnes.
TFS
Regards
Andrzej

Hello Adri

Very nice photograph with excellent detail and texture!! Nice POV and composition!

Very nice work

regards,
Christian

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3315 W: 789 N: 4433] (19960)
  • [2009-06-03 14:14]

Hi Adri,
This is a wonderful seascape! The low POV enhances the vastness of the beach going to infinite!
Excellent title illustrates so nicely the movement,the perspective and the textures of this sandy shoreline. The luminous mix of blue and ochre tones is superb! Bravo! Annie

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  • sande Gold Star Critiquer [C: 58 W: 1 N: 4] (1443)
  • [2009-06-03 14:23]

Adri

Een mooie foto met een geweldig gedicht. Je hebt er een hoop werk van gemaakt.Maar deze foto verdiend dat ook.

Groet Ben

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 519 W: 133 N: 973] (7147)
  • [2009-06-03 14:54]

GreetingsAdri,
vibrant capture of the light across the sands textures. Great detail & sharpness.Love all the shapes & textures.
TFS

Ron

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1457 W: 275 N: 2061] (12582)
  • [2009-06-03 15:01]

Hi Adri.
Beautiful composition and very relaxing view.
Well managed view from the top to the bottom.
More is less.
Best Regards.
Janek Kloss

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2009-06-03 19:15]

A very good title for this. I love the lines and swirls and superb detail. Nice work! TFS

Beautiful photo Adri, the patterns in the sand look awesome! The water looks very clear too, love the blue hues and tones here. Well photographed.

TFS,
Scott.

Een en al schoonheid
Bij deze lage zonne stand
De natte zand vormen komen echt heel goed uit
Mv Grt
Ruud

Goede morgen Adri.
Op de lyrische toer ? haha
Mooi Engels gedicht hoor. Suits the picture very well.!
Altijd interessant om the waves in the sand te zien.
De Natuur kan er de mooiste afbeeldingen van maken.
De blauwe kleur in het water zorgt voor een goede afwisseling.
Groeten uit een bewolkt Berrege.
Jan

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 103 N: 597] (2759)
  • [2009-06-04 1:30]

Fantastic, I loved the depth Adri
Using F/14 @ ISO 100 recouping 1 stop from 1/100 to 1/125 worked very well.

Great job
TFS
Cheers
JZM

well balanced composition between the blue areas and the sand patterns
jc

I love to see the things that nature can do. This is an interesting shot showing how awesome the simple things can be. I love the rippled effect in the sand. Very nice shot.
Tracy

Hi Adri
Amazing rhythm in this professional composition
Excellent POV and DOF
Superb natural colors and details, BRAVO
TFS> Alireza

Hoi Adri!
Wonderful capture,beautiful view!
nice texture and details,good pov!
great light,colours and perspective!
i like the rippled effect on the sand!
Greetings and tfs
Kostas

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1400 W: 0 N: 1702] (13715)
  • [2009-06-05 13:57]

Een mooie kim zoals we dat op Noortuk zouden zeggen Adri,bij laag water is het op strand op zn mooist.

jan

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  • willie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 8 N: 306] (3101)
  • [2009-06-08 23:09]

Het is gewoon een kunstwerk Adri, prachtig ! Voeg daarbij een mooie note en je hebt een volmaakte inzending.
Complimenten hoor.

groetjes, willemien

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