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Best Friends
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| Photo Information |
Copyright: Aleksei Kolesnikov (kolesn)
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 89 W: 9 N: 33]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-s.gif) (1012) |
| Genre: People |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2009-09-14 |
| Categories: Humorous |
| Camera: Nikon D50 |
| Exposure: f/5.6, 1/320 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2009-10-04 15:27 |
| Viewed: 95 |
| Points: 0 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| These two creatures, Mr. Right and Mr. Left, help me a lot in discovering new lands. To thank them, I made their portrait locating them on an old Dutch pavement. |
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Bonjour Aleksei,
Nice try here (I tried the same thing not so long ago but did not post it for the very same reasons that I will develop about your picture).
But I think that you could have taken more time to think about your composition. The wall behind is rather disturbing more than helping for your story. Ther is a cigarette butt, and some broken glass that do not help to show the beauty of the old pavement.
I would definetely have walked one or two steps further from the wall to take only the pavement.
Why not also give some movement to your feets?
Looking forward for the "best friends" nb2... leading you to your next destination.
Damien (points system off)
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 39 W: 26 N: 76]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-s-g.gif)
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