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A Piece Of Stairway


A Piece Of Stairway
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Copyright: Don Wallensteijn (wallie) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 527 W: 0 N: 485] (2552)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-18
Categories: Abstract
Exposure: f/3.4, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-19 15:24
Viewed: 758
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Last sunday I was alone with Charlotte and Justin and we went to the park (Zuiderpark) in The Hague. I had my camera with me to take pictures off them. When we were going back home, I saw a portico and liked the colours and lines and took a picture.

At home I cropped the picture a several times and I post this one; every item on a third of the picture.

Don

P.S.: Ruud, volgens mij heb ik zo een beetje de "invoerende lijn" en " de gulden snede" toegepast?

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Good graphical picure; I like your spontaneous action.
I think it would be better if you made the stairs horizontal instead of the lowest wallline.
Mooi maatwerk Don.
Huub

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27939)
  • [2005-09-19 16:13]

I like this POV but it's important like the note of HUub to make the stairs horizontal. All of graphic shot , we must be severe for this kind of details. Otherwise an interesting subject.

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  • biblio Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 523 W: 6 N: 225] (2498)
  • [2005-09-19 18:11]

Nice lines with a hint of texture and colour.I like the symmetry created here
TFS
Chris

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  • Fisher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 351 N: 944] (5728)
  • [2005-09-19 18:37]

Hi Don,

Excellent shot and well done on the composition. Excellent use of lines.

Mike

Great graphical image, Don !

Marleen

Hi Don,
Like your composition here... graphical, almost abstract! A very common subject made interesting, your cropping does it all...
Regards,
Pablo -

Don..
Lekkere prent ! Had iets groter moeten zijn denk ik ( treden )
Well done !

John

It's a nice graphical pic, Don, and your crop is well thought out.
Well done !
Martine

don,
I liked the graphic look here,and so nicely cropped one.
regards

Très linéaire......
Vraiment une belle composition....
Bravo j'aime beaucoup....
Claude

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1399 W: 0 N: 1695] (13693)
  • [2007-10-16 11:49]

Een hele leuke opname van doodgewoon Haags portiekje waar iedereen zo langs loopt zonder te kijken.
Jij echter niet Don ,heel strak.
Dank voor alle commentaren van Jan.

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