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Upstairs Downstairs


Upstairs Downstairs
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Copyright: Rob de Jong (Viking) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 63 N: 782] (4383)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon Digital Rebel XT 350D, Canon EFS 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6, Compact Flash 1 GB
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-11-10 9:34
Viewed: 577
Points: 43
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Inside an old farmhouss during
the vacation off the children.
To steep for my older Mother in law

Worked on this with my new PaintShopPro
edit program.

Thank you for seing this
Rob
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a tighter comp might have made this a stronger image, now it is all a bit much, the eye travels around too much, but, nice light, (*__*)

Hi Rob. Ik moest even goed kijken, want ik zag een Esher achtige foto. Maar als je goed kijk zie je een mooie compostitie en heldere kleuren. Erg Mooi.
Groet Frans.

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1186 W: 105 N: 3282] (16387)
  • [2005-11-11 2:58]

When you first look at this Rob yes your eye travels as madga indigo said... you kind of dont know which way is up or down for a second.. or where to look... interesting composition..and very steep stair case..
Thanks for sharing...
Kind regards from New Zealand..
Dawn.

Hallo Rob!
Aparte foto, ben het met Frans eens , bijna
een 3 demensionale foto.
Goed genomen, je ogen vallen zo van de trap naar beneden. Goed gedaan jochie!
Puntjes morgen
John

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  • lukdm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 415 W: 3 N: 21] (1348)
  • [2005-11-11 19:55]

schitterend plaatje en de kleuren vangen je blik onmiddellijk

Magda heeft wel gelijk; maar ik zou geen keuze kunnen maken om 'm wat kleiner te maken.
Misschien alleen de trap met aansluitende vloer; dat heeft wel wat, maar de hoek is moeilijk.
Het rood-wit-donker- spel is mooi hier.
Mooie sprong-draai-beschadiging onder aan de trap.
Groet
Huub

Hallo Rob,
heel tof al deze lijnen, horizontaal vertikaal, diagonaal, en de twee kleuren brengen veel frisheid!!!!
Goeie avond
A-Fr

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  • Josine Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 922 W: 21 N: 652] (4069)
  • [2005-11-16 15:11]

Nice shot again Rob
Good score !
Thanks for sharing
Josine

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1382 W: 154 N: 743] (8650)
  • [2005-11-16 15:33]

Ce méli-mélo des couleurs, de formes et de textures s'assemble pour donner quelque chose de particulièrement intéressant et graphique! J'aime beaucoup ce procédé!
Félicitations.
Luci

Well seen, Rob! Yes, this shot would probably benefit from a different crop, but it's a good start. I like the cheeriness of the colors!

Gayle :)

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  • CTP Gold Star Critiquer [C: 141 W: 0 N: 5] (42)
  • [2005-11-18 19:00]

Hi Rob,
Another interesting photo by you.
I love this lighting,colors,pov and focus.TFS
CT

Hi Rob, Interesting composition! There is just too much details in this photo but the smiles goes towards the effort and the great colors!

I like the pov and the red/ white colours and the lines in this picture. From old wood to old bricks in the backyard. Nice job.

Don

Rob,

Nice capture, how do you like the Digital Rebel (I just picked it up!!)

Cheers,

GT

Door de overhellende trap krijg je diepte. Dat zijn de eerste 10pnt dan is de kleurbalans ook nog eens echt mooi en ik heb maar 2pnt
Echt heel mooi, goede uitgebalanceerde compositie in lijn en kleur
Ruud

Hi Rob, good idea and it doesn't always work well, but you did it. Also the red and white colours makes it attractive.

Tfs, Yan :)

Very nice and colorful capture! The POV is quite impressive and overall a nice shot!
Vassilis

Great idea and well seen. A few minor points: a little burnt out [overexposed] in the white areas - easily correctable
i would have straightened it by counter rotation slightly
Overall a great effect and makes your eye work to see the details - well done

This is an unusual angle of view!I like the red and white colour combination too! The reflections on both side of the wood are interesting!
Regards,
chiping

Hi Rob,
Very sharp with good detail and colours.
Is every staircase this steep in Holland? I used to go to Amsterdam for long weekends and everywhere I stayed had very steep stairs.
Thanks for posting, enjoy the rest of the week.

Nice use of Fill-in flash to achieve well balanced illumination Rob. Yes the stairs do look very steep, obviously not constructed to current building regulations eh!? Whatever you did with the PaintShop Pro plainly "did the trick" as well.
Best wishes
Bill

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  • HaBeMa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 684 W: 142 N: 633] (3062)
  • [2007-06-20 16:06]

Hi Rob;I think very good a farmhouss,and red-stairs very nice...
Habema.
:-]

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