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fog
Photo Information
Copyright: erik mowinckel (erik_mowinckel) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 17 W: 11 N: 6] (207)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-03-30
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon EOS 350 D, 18-55mm EF-S Lens, 55mm Hama UV
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-03-30 9:28
Viewed: 889
Points: 37
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
cropped
healingbrush
tiny vignette
contrast
selective color
-erik
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Like the way you compose this one.

good theme. i wud like to see wide angle view of this bcoz u can see some repetitive patterns also there.pic size can be somewat larger.

sangeeth

Hi erik,
You have some very good strong B/W shots in your gallery. The repeating vertical columns go well with the horizontal lines. The person in the middle breaks the monotony to form the central focus. However, I would prefer to crop off part of the sky to accentuate the lower portion. What do you think?

As you walk away from me... you fading to white.. leave me alone in the dark... But i prefer it is me who stay alone then you....

That's a particular mmod i like! Greatly taken!

  • Great 
  • laine Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 376 W: 37 N: 106] (877)
  • [2006-03-30 12:20]

Good compo, perspective, great choice of B&W.
Well done and TFS!
Laine

Hi Erik, I like this photo. Great composition, geometry. Maurizio

Hi Erik
Very very nice composition.Fantastic photo.Snow and fog perfect.Good depth.
Well done.
TFS

Kerem

beautiful b/w and what a mood !

Marleen

A good case for a centered composition. Very moody picture, but that's what fog does most of the time! Nice work!

PS: Really some good stuff in your gallery!

Great composition and point of view. Very good moody shot. Well done Erik.
Diana

  • Great 
  • fox- Gold Star Critiquer [C: 73 W: 8 N: 6] (537)
  • [2006-03-30 18:12]

Perfect !!!
I love the fog

FOX

Nice scene Erik this a nice job.

Steph.

Moody shot! What is this place? Perfect timing, the place of walking man is very good, seems he!ll lost in fog after couple of steps..
Elif

The end of a film; just before the titles start running. Moody and quiet.
Good work Eric
Huub

  • Great 
  • veco (87)
  • [2006-06-16 11:26]

Perspective of the place just drags you to the middle of the picture, just where the person is heading. Great framing (croping).

Nostalgica inspira un sentir

Erik,

You convey such interesting moods and emotions through this simple black and white image... it's very matter of fact, and yet it's complex and confusing. I can't place my finger on what it is that I like about this photo... I just think it's really strong and dense with thought. Perhaps it's nothing at all, but that's what's so great about this photo... there's much to say about it, and yet it's all fabricated by the onlooker. I think this is a sensational shot, TFS!

Biance.

congratulations!! itīs one of the best picture that i had seen!

alfredo

  • Great 
  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 132 W: 54 N: 255] (2140)
  • [2008-03-26 12:13]

Hi Erik,

Great mood you've captured here!
I like the B&W and the point view!

Greetz Alex

Well done Erik

  • Great 
  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1465 W: 23 N: 0] (11700)
  • [2008-04-04 0:23]

Beautiful shot...
Very good composition...

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