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Perporator
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Copyright: Nadir Shah Kazimi (nsk) (172)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-02-21
Categories: Abstract
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-02-21 14:00
Viewed: 734
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
An experimental shot of industerial equipment, i appriciate any critiques and sugessions.
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  • andtine Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 240 W: 69 N: 179] (1107)
  • [2006-02-21 14:48]
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Hi Nadir,

I think this is an interesting shot of the industrial equipment, but I think it was a difficult lighting situation (distracting blown out highlights and an overall dark feel to the rest). Also I feel as though I am hunting around the picture for a focal point as there are a number of different areas demanding your attention. Did you consider a more abstract shot either focusing in close up on one the circular protrusions on the face of the disk or maybe even better a close up of one of the spikes sticking out with a sharp detail of the grooved surface surrounding it.

Andrew

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