Hustadvik bay

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• szekelykristof (12589)
• [2008-09-23 10:34]

Hi Niek,
Fantastic view in the background, sharp image, great colours. Excellent use of light despite the cloudy weather. The old boat in the front fulfills the composition. Well done, my friend!
TFS.
Best wishes,
Kristof

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• XOTAELE (8734)
• [2008-09-23 10:45]

Hola Niek.
Excelente imagen con un encuadre fabuloso.
Buenos detalles y precioso panorama.
Saludos, JL.

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• RSK (7106)
• [2008-09-23 11:54]
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Greetings Niek,I like your angle for composing this image,your choice of f/14 makes for a sharp detailed image,foreground to background,I wonder if a 200 ISO instead of the 100 setting used would have lightened the image just a tad as there was a nice patch of blue in the sky & the 200 ISO may have brought out the white of the boat a bit more?
Just MHO.
Ron

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• emanetkerem (4918)
• [2008-09-23 12:34]

Merhaba
Perfect armada. Very nice landscape. Good work. Well done. Thanks for sharring.

Kerem

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• mbasil (2860)
• [2008-09-25 3:17]
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This is a nice souvenier, Niek, and probably representative of Norway. I like the juxtaposition of the mechanical aspects of the boat and the soft curves and textures of nature.

I don't think think this is your best composition, though. I think placing the boat right in front of the hill doesn't work for me. The other nit I have is that I would have liked some more separation between the top of the boat and the bottom of the far shore. I doubt you had a ladder with you to get up 6 or 12 feet though. But maybe you could have developed a diagonal composition with some informal balance. I think a few steps to the left would have allowed you to place the hill in the upper left and the boat in the lower right. It also would have gotten the antenna away from the hill

Mike

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• bucanas (15276)
• [2008-12-15 4:31]

Hi Niek,
Beautiful bay,i like the boat and composition,weel done,thanks.
Best regards,
Ralf

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