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Photo Information
Copyright: Grzegorz Wszolek (puszek) (156)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-04-19
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Pentax *ist DS, SMC Pentax-A 50mm f/1.4
Exposure: f/2, 1/40 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-22 3:27
Viewed: 563
Points: 6
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nice photo nice model...

Krisjanis

Nice try! You were so close to pulling this off. For me anyway, the body is too far away from the wall. This causes the pose to look kinda fake, or uncomfortable. Now don't get me wrong, the shot is fine, just it would have been much better with the correction. Color might be nicer in a warmer shade. Keep shooting!!! TFS

Excellent tones and light but I agree with Scott about the uncomfortable pose of the model. TFS

Allan

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  • pemi71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 539 W: 13 N: 59] (2621)
  • [2007-04-22 17:20]

Hello Grzegorz ,
This is a lovely portrait of a beautiful lady. the lighting is very good. The expressions are captured well. The eyes look beatiful
tfs

Petar
tomorrow

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