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Copyright: Jacek Wiedenski (Yacow) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 69 W: 0 N: 2] (1721)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-06
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-15 9:26
Viewed: 247
Points: 14
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Hello, Jacek -
Great idea and really wonderful result for this portrait. Her hair seems to match the tones of the grain field perfectly and I like your choice to pose her with only her shoulders, neck and head visible, making her seem more a part of the field. Great DOF with the focal point just where it has to be, while the gently blurred foreground and background really work well to frame your subject. Nice slightly off-center composition. Excellent!

May I say one thing further - I see that you have given no critiques to others in well over a year. Please consider giving out some critiques - that is really one of the fundamental purposes of this site, and other members could really benefit from your vision and advice.

Jacek this is a amazing shot very well thought out the details are excellent as is the pov realy like the colours grt tones tfs
regards bryan
ps a note would be helpfull

hi, Jacek.This is original work with the Blonde tones matching the surrounding wheat field. Nice composition,clarity with softness, DOF and idea. Great post.

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2630 W: 1 N: 1244] (15359)
  • [2009-06-15 12:33]

Hola amigo,
Original trabajo y tonos,
fina composición y efectivo pov.
saludos

This is poetry, Jacek... Excellent harmony between your model and the textures of the field and excellent combination between image and title.
I also like the minimalistic colour treatment: it adds to the poetic mood.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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  • slasib (57)
  • [2009-06-19 12:02]

ma kolega farta :) mi zawsze wyskakują sarenki ze zboża a tu proszę blondyna. fajny pomysł, gratulki
pozdrawiam

nice shot ... i really like the concept

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