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Peron


Peron
Photo Information
Copyright: Jerzy Cierpicki (skorpion13) (872)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-09-10
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Polish feelings... [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-09-24 7:18
Viewed: 260
Points: 14
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  • Great 
  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 132 W: 54 N: 255] (2140)
  • [2008-09-24 7:25]

Hi Jerzy,

I like the B&W!
Those foggy shots are always great

TFS

Alex

cze Jerzy

super klimat!!
genialna mgla..
piekny kadr ..
Pozdro


ANia

Czolem Skorpionie!
Ciekawe zdjecie. Bardzo mgliste i zimne. Intrygujaca praca.
Pozdrawiam.

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  • Zeperix Gold Star Critiquer [C: 144 W: 4 N: 116] (1069)
  • [2008-09-24 9:03]
  • [2]

A superb composition. The vanishing point created by the train and rails going off to the right draws your eye into the photo. The people provide a good offset to these strong lines. The overhead truss (with all the X cross beams in it) can be made parrallel to the photo edge by using the ruler tool in photoshop. Ther eis also a dust spot to the left of the right power line that should be cloned out.

1. Select ruler tool.
2. Draw line along the edge of the truss.
3. Use the edit, rotate tool and use "arbitrary".
4. The degrees of rotation will already be in the angle box.

A bit more contrast would enhance the photo even more, but that is only my point of view.

Excellent work!

Hi Jerzy,
Beautiful composition,very good b&w,well done,congratulation.
Best regards,
Ralf

Hi jerzy,
Train stations always reminds me the past, they looks so nostalgic to me, the fog and B&W choice confirming this feeling, good perspective, very well done..
Selnur

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  • Reflex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 394 W: 252 N: 135] (3074)
  • [2009-04-09 10:10]

Nice mood ! Good perspective with this white line and the railway who disappears in the fog. Good choice of the B/W for this.
Best regards

  • Great 
  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 969 W: 100 N: 2231] (11229)
  • [2009-05-12 10:22]

Great atmosphere Jerzy... good catch!
Is there a nasty dust bunny in the top, between the power lines or is it a raindrop or something...
I think it's real easy to clone that out.
I really like the choice of black/white here, it goes well with foggy pictures.

Cheers,
Anneke

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