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Kasia


Kasia
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Copyright: Jerzy Cierpicki (skorpion13) (864)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-05-01
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): II :::Polki:::Polish Girls::: [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-09-27 11:15
Viewed: 343
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 16
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Beautiful eyes... nicely composed and well lit. TFS

Larry

A fantastic portrait. The lighting on the face and hair is perfect. Details are outstanding but I really like the angle of the background and how it adds to the image. A really nice shot. TFS

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  • sande Gold Star Critiquer [C: 56 W: 1 N: 4] (1307)
  • [2008-09-27 13:14]

Good expression.

Regards Ben

Hi Jerzy, I agree , lighting on the hair and face is perfect, eyes in focus but I find the black tile top right a little distracting and might have cropped it out. Great portrait though.
Best wishes
Rob :)

interesting graphic BG on the right, lighting is great, well framed, composed, just one thing is the serious glance, it's interesting and artificial at the same time
regards
jc

Nice portrait! But I think it is a little bit under exposed and I would crop it too, but just what I mean. I send you a WS that you can see what I mean. Hope It's ok.
Jorgen

Well done, great expression from the model, beautiful eyes.

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  • WTS Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 269 W: 56 N: 269] (1397)
  • [2008-09-29 7:11]

Had a chance to see the WS by Jorgen I see his point, but feel your shot evokes more mood. The darker BG, b&W and the models serious look are well delivered in your shot.
TFS Jerzy

wayne

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 498 W: 0 N: 1396] (8377)
  • [2008-09-30 13:19]

Witaj Jerzyku! Ciekawa twarz... swiatlo i ujecie...Piekny portret. Gratulacje i serdecznosci. Barbara

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