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Ceramics Beauty


Ceramics Beauty
Photo Information
Copyright: Darek Marcinkowski (darimarc) (1330)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-08-23
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/2, 1/8000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-11 13:08
Viewed: 246
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Gliniada 2008
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Hello Darek !

The thumbnail does not help much in attracting our eye to view this one. I love the idea and composition . her expression and look on the rose (?) is excellent.

Since she was acting as a statue, I do not understand why you took it at such high speed to end up with a too narrow DOF.

Indeed the blurred background is useful, but IMHO your entire subject should be in focus here.

Cheers!
Robert

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  • Hudda Silver Star Critiquer [C: 27 W: 0 N: 5] (26)
  • [2008-10-12 2:27]

very well
+ points for the idea...
ur models got deep eyes its trying to convey a silent message
" i m stunned by the pain life gave me"
brillant use ov light
very well
bt u didnt added any convincing notes...
do let us know ur POV
regards
HUDDA

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