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Copyright: Pawel Murczak (paweljg) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 322 W: 59 N: 1158] (8220)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-12-22
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Experimental, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 50mm 1.8D, Kingston SD 2Gb, 52mm HOYA UV filter
Exposure: f/4, 1/150 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-12-22 8:29
Viewed: 217
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is my totally first attempt in photo-studio and play's with light... :] Please, write what do you think... As a model my friend - Maciek.

Enjoy ^_^

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PP:

* crop pic
* add frame
* resized for TL

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Critiques and comments are welcome,

Pozdrowienia z Polski,
(Greetings from Poland)
Pawel
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Original POV and good composition. Nice attitude. A little too dark for me (workshop) but just a vision among an infinity. Well done !
Best regards
John

Studio lighting isn't easy at first. I think you did a good job with this short-lighting approach, shining it on the side of the subject away from the viewer.

It creates a dark and mysterious effect but also goes well with the pose and expression you have captured here.

Keep experimenting!
Rew

Hi Pawel,
I find this is the perfect example of a good "low key" lite picture; not to be confuse with underexposure.

I really like it. Good composition, crop and angle.
Well lite, apparent contours, and still details, in the shadows area.
I also like the expression on the model's face.
Very good work.

hello

dont know much about photo-studio thing..but i like the facial expression of the model...good attempt...tfs

:-)

Nice use of shadows and light Pawel. An effective shot!

Keep shootin'

Richard

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