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Signs of time...


Signs of time...
Photo Information
Copyright: Pawel Murczak (paweljg) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 322 W: 59 N: 1160] (8236)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-15
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 50mm 1.8D, Kingston SD 2Gb, 52mm HOYA UV filter
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): TEXAS EXCELLENCE AWARD I [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-01-16 1:07
Viewed: 368
Favorites: 4 [view]
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Everyone will be old...

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PP:

* crop pic
* add frame
* resized for TL

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Critiques and comments are welcome,

Pozdrowienia z Polski,
(Greetings from Poland)
Pawel

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Hello Pawel
this portrait is really good in light (soft tones) and espression of the face
Here you captured all the quality of this moment
really well framed
ciao
Lucio

Great use of light! This way the woman shows her emotion much more.
Great potrait
David

hello Pawel
this is a wonderful portrait shot
good focus on her face
nice capture of wrinkels
i need to have some light over her head so we could get a glimps of the scarf or the cap she is wearing.
i know i am asking for much :)
this is a fine portrait
the light on the face is pefect.

regards
Manuj Mehta

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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 434 W: 123 N: 728] (4867)
  • [2009-01-16 1:52]

Wooow, what a great and realistic portrait!! As if she is sitting next to me, talking to me....
What a details in this photo!! A great mood with the dark bg. Good use of the light!!

Well done, Pawel!

Janneke

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  • dcata Silver Star Critiquer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 3] (346)
  • [2009-01-16 1:53]

Great portrait ... clear details, good light -> good impact

tfs
dcata

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  • bupga Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 304 W: 6 N: 366] (2711)
  • [2009-01-16 2:09]

Wow this is great, I like the composition with strong DOF sharpness and details. Classic!

tfs.........Buddy

ciao pawel

i like this one beautiful portrait you caught the expression here..
and the tone are fine...

well done

tfs

bhot

Great portrait!

Olá, Pawel!

What a wonderful expression of her face! Great
sharpness, point of view and use of light. It´s
really nice! Amazing job, Pawel! Congratulations!

Brazilian greetings,
Bruno

Hello Pawel!
Great portrait, with good pose and composition, sharp details and bright natural colours .

Well done
Regards
Kostas

Trčs belle composition, le titre est bien choisi
Congratulations
Luc

great portrait
regards
Karl

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  • b021 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 0 N: 48] (1180)
  • [2009-01-16 9:10]

Hi Pawel,
Excellent portrait ! Comgrats...
Branimir

Powerful light and details, excellent light, excellent composition.

Excellent.

Rew

Czołem Paweł
rewelacyjny temat, wspaniale wykonane zdjęcie, świetna kompozycja, kolory, nie wiem co Ty tam użyłeś (gradient jakiś chyba) ale efekt mrocznej, smutnej starości jest, brawo
pa
Magda

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  • tty007 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 63 N: 184] (2585)
  • [2009-01-16 16:01]

Very nice portrait. Old people are always appreciated in a show. Great tone of colors, great frame. Nice sepia with a bit color tone too. Sharp, nice composition! Great work!

TFS

One of the BEST portraits I have seen on TL! Incredible details, fantastic low light with just the light hitting her face! Excellent sharpness and the lines in her face are amazing! I'm amazed! You get an award for this one!
B-)
Linda

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19910)
  • [2009-01-16 17:34]

Hi Pawel,
Terrific and touching portrait!
This "clair/obscur (shadows and light) is done at the manner of great Masters!
The pose with her glance returned into herself is so evocative of the loneliness of the old persons. Excellent with all aspects! My compliments! Annie

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1493 W: 23 N: 0] (11826)
  • [2009-01-16 23:54]

Hi Pawel...
Beautiful portrait with beautiful texture...
Nice light...
Regards...
Andro

Yes, and a haunting reminder thereof. Excellent work. It reminds me of a Rachmaninoff song about a man who encounters a former lover who has lost her beauty to merely getting old . . . it's a very sad and touching song . . . of course the writer doesn't mention what HE looks like after all those years either.

Keep shootin'

Richard

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  • cycle Gold Star Critiquer [C: 228 W: 0 N: 3] (1851)
  • [2009-01-17 8:06]

Excellent portrait...
Bravo

wspaniałe kolory!

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  • papon Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 35 W: 38 N: 70] (541)
  • [2009-04-05 14:23]

Hi Pawel,
Lovely portrait...
perfectly matching with the title...
very nice and well done..

Regards,
Sunandan.

OOOOOOOhhhhh....! No doubt...you are really a great photograph.....!!!
This is Not an ordinary portrait.....This is simply one of the most beautiful i seen on TL......
Straight into my favorites.....
Thanks for your way to see the things....
Claude

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