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Copyright: Pawel Murczak (paweljg) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 322 W: 59 N: 1153] (8178)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-04-12
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 50mm 1.8D, Kingston SD 2Gb
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-04-12 4:37
Viewed: 246
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My sister as a model... :]

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PP:

* crop pic
* convert to b/w
* add texture
* add frame and signature
* resized

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Critiques and comments are welcome,

Pozdrowienia z Polski,
(Greetings from Poland)
Pawel
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Hello Pawel,
beautiful portrait very well composed, with a great control of the dof. The expression and the pose of the model and the choice of the b&w are just perfect making the presentation excellent and very pleasant to look at. Well done.
Thanks and regards,

Ele

Hi Pawel,

A marvellous beautiful sister! You produced a high quality portrait with adequate light and that was enough! I would eliminate the other part of the picture.
Best regards.

Francis Xavier

Hi Pawel:
face beautiful,beautiful picture.
very good P/W
good work on this.
congratulations

regards
Salomao

Very good portrait Pawel! Your sister is very cute and she wears the right dress for a B&W picture. Well done!
Sotiris

Hi Pawel...your sister is beautiful and you did a great job on this shot.

Roger

Hi Pawel,
great BW presentation with great DOF.
good choice of dress and BW.
lover her pose and expression.
she looks beautiful.

greeting from indonesia
yopie

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2016 W: 144 N: 3390] (13589)
  • [2009-04-12 9:34]

hi Pawel

Very good portrait of this lovely model, nice skin tone and light control. I would prefer to see less of the space and distracting element at the left.

But the portrait is well done with good sharp focus.

tfs, bill

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 523 W: 23 N: 1849] (11166)
  • [2009-04-12 10:44]

Hi Powel,
A very lovely B&W portrait of your beautiful sister!
Congratulations!

TFS and greetings from Netherlands,
Adri

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 270 W: 20 N: 664] (3219)
  • [2009-04-12 11:21]

Hi Pawel,

Very nice B&W portrait, lots of expression and soul.
Excellent DOF presentation and lighting. Well executed!

Cheers,
Ramon

Your sister makes a great model! Beautiful shot. Well managed composition, light, and DOF. Her pose is perfect for the setting. Terrific b&w conversion too, everything just feels right.
Rew

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