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Two Bottles


Two Bottles
Photo Information
Copyright: Tomasz Kazimierczak (btokaz) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1060 W: 127 N: 167] (5744)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-03-26
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/5.2, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-04-09 17:55
Viewed: 697
Points: 48
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
IMPORTANT NOTICE:
The bottles are on the window:)
Regards...
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To andrewgg: Thanksbtokaz 2 04-10 14:33
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Great bw Tomasz, good composition.
Sergio

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2006-04-09 19:12]
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Hi Tomasz!
This is a lovely b&w picture! I really appreciate the graphical aspect of it all, but .. where are the two bottles? :)

Congratulations.
Luci

At first, I couldn't spot the bottles, either, Tomasz! Now I see them after reading your reply to Luci. Doesn't really matter that they don't figure in the photo as the major item that I thought they would be from the title, because this is so well done. You did well to choose black and white here, as it emphasises the stark, graphic simplicity of the image.
Yours,
Andrew.

nice bw tones and graphism! the title is subliminal to the windows/door. tfs.
jeff

Well done Tomaz! Compliment (^___^)
John

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Ladna kompozycja graficznie i dobry tytul.
Rafal

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3563 W: 737 N: 2401] (19058)
  • [2006-04-10 5:45]

Lovely B&W image, Tomasz.
Good composition and funny interpretation ...


tfs and have a great week,
v

Excellent travail!

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  • pip Silver Star Critiquer [C: 33 W: 2 N: 1] (184)
  • [2006-04-10 10:22]
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Great B&W Tomasz

Really good shadows are cast upon the walls
it give a cosy feeling.

Regards Pip

hi Tomasz,

Very nice composition with this shadow of a tree. the b&w works well, excellent crop... and the bottles, a little detail, nice.

regards,

ferran

superb graphism
Class A done
congrats

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 782 W: 3 N: 108] (2309)
  • [2006-04-11 9:49]

shadow ..
good taken in motion. About compo no need to speak with you.Perfect b&w!
V

Good use of the shadow of the tree, and nice simple composition. Well done, Tomasz!

Witaj Tomku,
dosc nietypowy tytul. Sczerze mowiac mialem problem z jego zrozumieniem, dopoki nie przeczytalem notki. Samo zdjecie b. fajne - mile ksztalty pochodzace od cienia na prawej scianie, ozywiaja calosc i daja jakies takie fajne cieplo.

Marek

Hello Tomasz! I just love the composition, so simple and great! And that shadow on the wall is the cherry on the cake! :) TfS
cheers
ToM

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  • drymd29 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1447 W: 248 N: 654] (7621)
  • [2006-04-16 11:45]

haha; funny!
First I thought you drunk 2 bottles as an excuse for making this.
Well; you need no excuse, what you did is great; I would take it still more close to get rid of the roof; but that is a minor point.
Thanks Tomasz
Huub

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-04-19 21:10]

Very nicely done, Tomasz. I like the play of light & shadows in this picture as well as your composition with all of the round windows & the round doors. Nice use of vertical lines. Well done!

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  • tet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 39 N: 196] (3625)
  • [2006-04-20 10:17]

ha! nice concept! love the b&w tones here.

tfs,

tet

Very nice contrast here. I can see you have a good control of B&W shot! Well done.

Very nice black and white shot. Great composition. I love the shadow of the tree/branches on the wall with the windows. It adds more character to the image. Great job.

Anton

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-04-27 7:42]
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beautiful minimalistic shot, Thomas... you have a wonderful gallery! congratulations!

anca

You are a great artist! As well as all the other your photos, you made an ordinary scene/object into something so special. TFS
Yukiko

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  • jafsc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 504 W: 53 N: 88] (4621)
  • [2006-05-09 8:27]

Great composition, simple, good play of lights:)
José

Hi Tomasz,
A very interesting composition here. When I first spotted it, for instant, I thought I was looking at a photo of a doll's house or a model. Seeing the bottles brought me back to reality (I think??!!). Great use of high contrast yet some interesting shadow detail still visible, interesting location.
Best wishes
Bill

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  • jasp Gold Star Critiquer [C: 499 W: 3 N: 7] (3614)
  • [2006-05-17 13:59]

here the bottles no is the most important Tomasz, architecture with pure lines and shadows doing the composition excellent.

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