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Eva
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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: Marcin Przewies (TwinLight) (455) |
| Genre: People |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2008-09-28 |
| Categories: Portrait |
| Exposure: f/5.6, 1/80 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2008-12-03 4:11 |
| Viewed: 269 |
| Points: 6 |
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12-03 05:22 |
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- KBE
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(2759) - [2008-12-03 4:20]
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Hi Marcin
Beautiful model great details and nice lighting, i guess if ur model had straight eye contact and clear BG would have turned it more fantastic :)
Great job
TFS
JZM
Hello Marcin. Very good portrait. With this I would say photographer involvement feeling... You have the contact with the model here and this is not only eye contact. This type of contact is the hardest to get in portrait photography....
It would be great if You could tell me more about post-proccessing. I like the effect very much..
May I ask for a little tutorial? Thanks in advance,
Siarhei
czesc Marcin..
piekny portret!
swietna robota!
dobrze skomponowane!
pozdro
Ania
Sweet shot.
A shame there's no photographer's note.
Rew
Her face came out fair, however, the forearm is a little bit cooked because of the brightness of the light and takes away from the overall shot. TFS
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I disagree with Rew about this being a "sweet shot" but agree that there should be a photog note, as per the site guidelines.
If you had written proper notes we'd know what you were trying to achieve and therefore be able to critique more appropriately. The girl does have a sweet appeal, but the hair between her eyebrows isn't, to me, an attractive feature. Could either be groomed in advance or removed with pp work.
I'm also not convinced by the lighting here, but as you have not written a note, we cannot know how the subjet was lit and therefore cannot critique appropriately.