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Studying
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Copyright: Christopher Tomicz (sir-torpeda) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 14 W: 2 N: 14] (343)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-02-02
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Canon 300D, Tamron AF 28-75 2.8 DI LD
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-02-02 7:36
Viewed: 716
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Polish]
It's my first uhm... portrait - can I call that this one? I've done it with flash and one light behind this model.

PP:
Converted to B&W (in color it was crappy in my opinion:) ), cloned one little thing, cropped, added frame and violla ;)

Fell free to comment :)
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Czesc Krzysztofie,

przyjerzalem sie, pomyslalem i zrobilem swoja wersje. Pierwsza rzecz ktora mi nie pasuje to za szerokie kadrowanie, a przede wszystkim ta nieostra reka. Zaciesnilem kadr ( wg mnie dalej widac, ze jest na czyms skupiona - uczy sie... :-D ), podczyscilem zdjecie z zaklocajacych szczegolow, zjechalem z kontrastami (za ostre swiatlo bylo wg mnie - nie dalo sie uniknac przepalen w okolicy lewego policzka i oka), zmiekczylem calosc i podostrzylem minimalnie kontur. Dodalem ramke.

Zajrzyj do Workshopa - ciekawi mnie, czy Ci sie moja wersja podoba. Pozdrowienia dla Kasi :-)

Marek

great capture :) the woman has a strong expression, it makes me think of what was she thinking :) very nice the B&W process. thank you for share it

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