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My first still life...


My first still life...
Photo Information
Copyright: Mariusz de Roqfort (Roq) (1765)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-07-29
Camera: Sony DSC F-717
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/250 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-01 14:56
Viewed: 596
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I know. It's very tight frame, but I like this photo very, very much... It's my first composition...When I've got a large prints from lab, I was nicely suprised because of its high quality of colour and details. I was trying to get painting effect and I thing I made it in 50% ;))))
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Well good for you, look at him! This is really a good work, IMHO. I don't much about this type of photos, but I think you've managed to capture different textures in a good way. Light might be better, but for the first attempt - this is a masterpiece! :))
Good job done, keep on experimenting!

Regards
Robert

P.S. One smiley definitely goes to efforts!

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  • booz Silver Star Critiquer [C: 22 W: 0 N: 1] (643)
  • [2005-09-02 8:32]

hmm - szkoda że nie można tu dostrzec żadnej żniwiareczki, która przyniosła tenże koszyczek sobie na pole :)) - fajna kompozycja - dobre światelko
Pozdrawiam
Tomek

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  • ceui (3)
  • [2005-09-03 12:11]

Jeżeli to twoja pierwsza kompozycja to...
jakie będą następne . Ta jest dopracowana i można ją drukować powiedzmy w kalendarzach czy innych publikatorach.

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  • russte (6)
  • [2006-04-23 11:01]

Mariusz, this is a very lovely still-life. The mix of pastel colours is perfect. Perhaps it might benefit from a little more grain or very gently applied soft-focus technique to bring it closer to an oil painting but it would be difficult to improve. Stephen

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