Agata without eye :)

Critiques [Translate]

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• Elfik (2439)
• [2005-10-01 18:55]

A dlaczego ta pani ma pozê prawie tak± jak pani z mojego zdjêcia prawie obok?;))) bardzo ³adnie, subtelnie tak...

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• magda_indigo (31245)
• [2005-10-01 20:42]

a lovely portrait, good pose, (*_*)

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• richardj7 (582)
• [2005-10-01 23:36]

Nice pose, nice expression of the model. The colors are soft and go well with the model. My only critique is the way her hair falls on her right side. That portion of skin that is shown on her right cheek detracts a little bit from her eye. It may have been a little bit better if it had been balanced so that her hair flowed more smoothly. Otherwise, a wonderful portrait.

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• laaccia (4917)
• [2005-10-02 3:36]
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Hello:)
Co Wy tak z tymi łokciami? (Ty i Elfi??:)))
umówiliście się:>;)


pozdrawiam

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• ropetko (0)
• [2005-10-03 7:03]

Well well, isn't that our "famous" model again?! :)
It's always nice to see a good photographer's early work, that usually shows us his learning curve.
YOu did a good job here, but you created composition with wrong eye at the focal point! YOu either should show the hidden eye more, or to leave some resting space on the left. Still, the sharpness is OK, effect on her skin is invisible and DOF is well chosen. Her elbow could be a bit lower to form nice triangle that goes to the lower left part of the photo, which might create excellent composition, but I still think this is very good portrait.
Keep up experimenting!

Regards
Robert

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• bscheller (32)
• [2005-10-03 11:09]

moja ulubiona modelka, z twojich wszystkich zdjec. bardzo ladne portrety masz z nia, bardzo naturalne. super kolory!

pozdr.
-Bartek

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• stecotdon (4883)
• [2005-10-04 7:42]

I like it ;9
She's very sweet and you did a very good job. Lovely colours and very well presented image.

Well done!

take care, Stef :))

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• jangliss (162)
• [2007-03-12 19:52]

She is a very beautiful girl and this is a well executed portrait.