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Marta


Marta
Photo Information
Copyright: Przemek Goral (zeed) (119)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-12-05
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): From dark to light [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-01-08 16:54
Viewed: 884
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Ps desaturate, levels, crop
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Yes, the eye lashes of Trek L.
Welcome to Trek L. Przemek. Glad you posted this wonderful image. Excelent composition.
Is this you or someone else.?

Mike

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  • torr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 50 N: 80] (1735)
  • [2005-01-08 17:03]
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bellisimo, love it.
If you give me the view, I would give it some more contrast.
But if you want to know, I think they call me mr contrast, so it is more my problem then yours.
I do think you can tell us more, I gott the feeling,... and it is a good one.
Treklens gives us a vieuw, a minde and a reson to show the things we capture.
Greets torr

Welcome to TL Przemek! A lovely portrait. I like the tight framing and the strong use of black. Maybe a bit more contrast would be nice, but that's a personal thing. Cheers!

Excellent image Przemek. Welcome to TE!

I really like it.
Sharpen. B/W was a perfect option. The way that her face disapear gradually to the dark is very beautiful.

Congrats. I'll add to theme "From dark to light".

Alex

This is a wonderful portrait, well done.

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  • mugush Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 477 W: 48 N: 164] (1728)
  • [2005-01-09 12:26]

Zeed You know you produced master piece in the form of "Marta". very well done! you have a creative mind. most of all I like angel, detail of eye lash and Desaturate. by the way WELCOME to TL. keep it up, we need more excellent in future from you.
Love
Mugush

lovely and beautiful....

congratulations....
awesome compo

very attractive portrait. well cropped, good choice of b&w.
So emotional.
Please another one, two, three ...

Good tight cropping and choice of black and white. It looks a little big grey; perhaps a slight contrast.

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  • jude Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 51 W: 1 N: 10] (447)
  • [2005-01-19 17:22]

goopd choice for BnW here zeed, you ve done a good work on focus, by cropping tool, thus bringing attention to your model..

good blurry contrast
jude

An amazing POV!...It's really great! I like it a lot! I've added it to my faves...TFS! :)

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