Turn over in one`s mind

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• albreca (377)
• [2005-01-22 17:04]

Hi Przemek, amazing picture. I like her view, with the eyes a little bit down.
excellent work
bye alex

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• DigiSpy (808)
• [2005-01-22 19:50]
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Hi Przemek,
I like your portrait very much, indeed the look downwards looks very attractive. The shadow regions give a calm view on the image.
I only think the skin is a bit to hard, I think because of the light used there are little imperfecntions of the skin visible that would not be seen in normal daylight.
I tried in a WS to soften that effect and add just a bt of color back in the image.
Good posting, good portrait, Richard

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• dormoy (491)
• [2005-01-22 23:44]

One of the key conditions of success in producing a portrait such as this one is light management.
It would have helped very much if you had indirect lighe spread on a wide white screen or wall to soften the shadows which are much too pronounced.
The background is much too dark. The face and eyes of this lady are not put in value.
The face is too much off-centered towards tot right edge.

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• padre (4035)
• [2005-01-23 7:54]

This is nice and soft. Good lighting.

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• Quark (66)
• [2005-03-12 14:11]

And here's another portrait for example.
It's a good one, a thinking mood, she is not very happy maybe and that's what I see.
The WS, made by Richard is also a nice one.
Can you see the eyes here, a "speaking" portrait now, nice done.
I have seen some more of your portraits, they are good too, Przemek !