Walking

Critiques [Translate]

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• ErikSven (2299)
• [2009-08-05 5:40]

Hello Jan,
Visually, I like the "glittering" environment, the combination of vertical and horizontal lines creating a tunnel-effect, as well as the black & white treatment, that gives the afore-mentioned aspects an artistic touch.
Your photo also has a certain suggestive power. The woman seems to be walking in a "clean" but somehow unreal (even menacing) environment. A hospital? Anyway, a strong mood.
Finally, whereas I like your square format, I'm not 100% sure about your black frame, having the feeling that your photo could do without it.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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• salomaoquaresma (1685)
• [2009-08-05 7:18]

Hi Jan:
very beautiful W/B,good.
excellent DEPH.
fantastic capture.

regards
Salomao

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• abhi80 (207)
• [2009-08-05 7:52]

It's a piece of pure art......quite a composition. The treatment is awesome and the texture of pic adds on the B&W color theme. TFS!

- Abhishek

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• nova (8651)
• [2009-08-05 18:54]

Some notes and more participation from your part for comments and critiques would be appreciated.I love your composition.This is an eyecatching picture however I find that it is too much noisy.The big grain,especially on the arms of the lady,is not nice.The light play though is interesting.TFS
Michel

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• mikolaj_cava (29284)
• [2009-08-07 1:15]

Czesc Jan! Mistrzostwo, mistrzostwo Polski. W moich oczach przynajmniej. Klaniam sie!