privateer

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-07-31 17:24]

Hi Pawel, really nice abstract and I really like the black and white. The way the tones of the sky are close to the midtones of the pole (sorry I don't know boat jargon :P) make this interesting and appealling. The way the natural lighting makes bright the right-hand rope and makes the left-hand rope darker makes the shot dynamic and adds some contrasts. The point of view from the bottom looking up at the pole and ropes and mast at the bottom left really emphasize the converging nature of the lines and I love how the focal point is off-center, making this very balanced and unified. Be careful with the tiny little dark spot at the way top left corner and try to see if you could add a little bit more contrast to the pole and ropes to really make them pop out. Otherwise very eye-catching and well-seen, thanks for sharing!
-Lara