Waiting for dusk ...

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• Redrubin (0)
• [2008-02-20 1:39]

Hi Arkadiusz
nice shot a beautiful portrait
ciao
Lucio

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• Black_Dog (1815)
• [2008-02-20 1:51]

Czolem Arox!
Ciekawy portret. Ciekawe miejsce, dobre tlo. Interesujace swiatlo. Udane foto.

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• paweljg (8234)
• [2008-02-20 7:13]

Yo Bro,

Ladnie, ladnie... I modelka, i miejsce, i PP... Fajnie wykombinowane :] Podoba sie...

Pozdrowionka

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• milas (32833)
• [2008-02-20 7:55]

Merhaba myfriend Dear Arkadiusz...
verynice shot and pov..superb B&W and detail..bravo..selamlar

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• MagdalenaN (6490)
• [2008-02-20 9:27]

Hej Arek
³adna kompozycja, dobry poziom szaro¶ci i czerni, temat wdziêczny -:)piêkne to morze w tle, a czarno/bia³a kolorytyka dodaje nastroju ca³o¶ci
pozdrawiam
Magda

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• machinelove (16007)
• [2008-02-21 8:16]
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Great B/W portrait Arkadiusz!
The tilt on the horizon is interesting.
Usually this troubles me, but here it works
to lift the mood, Good light capture.
Nice work!
- Vincent

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• japiey (8972)
• [2008-02-21 8:26]

Hi Arkadiusz

The POV selected is fantastic here..
Good shot, with her looks to the right end..
B/W is best here..

jp

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• jusninasirun (9790)
• [2008-02-21 8:50]

Hello Arkadiusz,

Thanks for sharing this beauty with us. Useful black and white conversion with good contrast management. Well posed in head turned pose exposing the shape of the face in good contrast with the stunning background.

Regards,
Jusni

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• Dingo (11948)
• [2008-02-22 15:03]
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I'll start with what I don't like here, Arox... first, the horizon tilted like this looks weird to me, and I think it's a pity that the horizon seems to run through Dorothy's head. Secondly, your thin black inner frame runs through her toes and I find that disturbing. Also, two signatures looks like one too much for me.

So: I'd have straightened the horizon here. If the model was bent over a bit, that would look quite natural...

What I do like is the light in the shot: your fill flash was really needed to give the model enough light, and still the backdrop is well exposed too. In general I prefer colours, especially in sunsets. But here I actually like your b&w conversion. Her blouse looks very colourful, and would probably have competed with the sky for attention.
TFS

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• korbee (13637)
• [2008-04-12 11:26]

Very romantic picture and good posing.
Thanks.
jan

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• sanderos (408)
• [2008-07-18 14:52]

Bardzo dobre zdjêcie. Zatrzymuje wzrok i skupia na szczegó³ach. £adna modelka :)