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Another boring seascape.


Another boring seascape.
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Copyright: Pawel Ziolo (zielsko) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 58 W: 29 N: 5] (560)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-11-12
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Mood
Camera: Canon EOS 3000N, Canon EF 35-105mm 1:3.5-4.5, Kodak Profoto 100
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-11-28 5:18
Viewed: 725
Points: 10
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Excellent framing, very good POV. I think a perfect silence there here. A fantastic place to think, Thank and think. Very good select of BW. Congrats.

But NO!
Stark, yes. There is plenty of visual delight here to combat boredom. The tonal quality, the heavy diagonal, the thin dividing horizon line (almost level), the gulls - and the gull IN the water helps. All good.
I would probably be tempted to take a thin slice off the top, to move the horizon line a little higher in the frame. After all, there are no cloud details to lose. I realise that it is now on the third line but ...
All in all, well worth a 'Laughing Medal'

bdb ziarno tonacja barwa kadr fajne zdjecie

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2115 W: 92 N: 1856] (10317)
  • [2005-12-02 5:21]

Hello Pawel,
This is far from beeing noring with this diagonal in the middle and the seagull that bring life to it. Great shot.
Luc

hey:) podoba sie;)))

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