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Copyright: Anna Klinkosz (limba3) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1082 W: 436 N: 421] (13334)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-06
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-11-06 18:24
Viewed: 586
Points: 14
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Hello,
It is really beautiful photo-ground full of leaves...I think it needs a more tight crop not to be the bottom parts of the trees.
Anyway I like it.
Tar

Fantastic colours. I, too, would have taken the trees out and cropped to just the bench and left the full width. Just personal taste?

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Hi Anna,

Indeed a very boculic image. Lovely colours and wonderful autumn mood. I just think that maybe the far background, even if it has nice light, should be cropped. IMHO, comp would benefit from that.

Well done anyway! good job!!

take care, Stef :))

ps: did a ws hope you don't mind

Hi,
Very nice photo with beautiful autumn leaves. Congratulations and TFS :-)
Egemen

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1565 W: 126 N: 2218] (20369)
  • [2005-12-07 18:48]

Hello Anna !

I really like this one, you expressed very well that time of the year. Good work !

Mario

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  • dafema (86)
  • [2005-12-23 18:05]

beautiful photo of the Autumn colours....
David

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  • L810th Gold Star Critiquer [C: 108 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-03-04 11:26]
  • [+]

Hi! Anna,

I have done a WS to present this lovely scene in a different way. I felt the foreground was excessive and the density of colour too weak. The chair is also running parallel to the frame and not inviting us to enter the scene. I hope you like my version of this lovely autumn scene.
Mike.

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  • kona Gold Star Critiquer [C: 68 W: 0 N: 1] (1258)
  • [2006-05-10 1:29]

It is my favorite photograph. Composition and a color.

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